Rainbow Dash definitely did NOT want to go to other dimensions today.
This is just randomness. To sum it all up, Pinkie Pie wakes Rainbow Dash up, telling her that she wanted to show her something. Turns out Pinkie invented a Dimension Gun(DG) and they go dimension traveling, meeting Cheese along the way.
This is my first story, so sorry if it stinks:/
Not as obvious as you'd think....
Was the first other dimension the Warriors dimension?
4851342 ok, thanks for telling me that. I wasn't sure if I should split it or not, I was thinking that I had done that a lot already
This could have done so much more. Though I will balance the up and downvotes.
4851319 ???
I thought it was obvious that they were humans. Or anyway, I got it.
I think it would be better as one chapter. Put together, it still comes across as a short, amusing one-shot, and the sharp transitions--which are intentional--aren't quite so drastic. You can always round things out a bit more.
It's a cute idea, and I'm upvoting it. And you've just published your first fanfic!
4851431 Thanks for the advice!! Yup, this is my first fanfic on fimfiction!I've actually been on it a lot before I had my account. And believe my when I say this, you're one of my favorites!!
4851402 thanks
4851391 oh my gosh...it could've been
I really like it it was great!
4851893 thank you!!
4851403 The author note, about it being obvious they're humans. I didn't know 'till I saw the authors note. All this fic needs a little more attention to detail and it'd be awesome!
4851965 Oh ok!! Thanks for telling me!
4851990 You're welcome!
Sliders - Equestrian Edition
4852262 Deep thoughts
ooohhhh so interesting!!! I like this!
5549633 Thanks!
I LOVE IT!!!! FAVOURITE AND LIKE FO U!!!
P.S I got it when they became Humans... And the part where they went to the Warriors' world (I'm going to call it that), my BFF Jess would LOVE that!
5549664 OMG THANK YOU SO MUCH :'3
Tell Jess I said hi :D