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The Siren Song: Dazzle Dazzle, Little Stars - Shadowmane PX-41



One song. That's all it takes for a whole new life to begin, and for three certain singers, that song is about to change their lives forever.

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Fortissimo's Ode To The Dazzlings (Epilogue)

Fortissimo stood atop a skyscraper with his fellow Blasters in the midst of the night. His devious smile was a dead giveaway that his plan was drawing closer and closer to fruition. He was joined by Allegro and Orchestral, who both revealed their Siren Pendants once the coast was clear.

He looked down upon the illuminated city, watching as all the cars went past as little lights on the road below. He could see how truly majestic this world was at night, but he then cast a little frown as he knew that he was going to have to do something about it.

"How much longer do you think it will take for The Dazzlings to grow up, Fortissimo?" Orchestral said as he walked over to him and put his hands on the railings so they wouldn't fall.

"Patience, Orchestral," Fortissimo said as he locked gazes with his fellow Siren as they walked to the centre of the tower's peak, where it looked like the stage used in the Battle Of The Bands had been recreated for the three of them. "Our little sisters can't grow up any quicker, you know."

"Do you even know what you're going to do once they grow up, Fortissimo?" Allegro decided to ask, wondering what would happen once their little sisters did eventually return to their initial states. "We have the Ultimate Amplifier, so why can't we just sing the Song of Resurrection now?"

"Simple, Allegro..." He said as a tune came out of nowhere, accompanying his voice quite well. "While our voices are quite strong as they are, they'll be amplified once The Dazzlings have their powers back."

"And once they are?" Orchestral decided to further the question some more.

"Our species will be immortal..." Fortissimo said, casting a wicked gaze on his two pendants, which both glowed rather violently with his voice.

"Lyrica is calling... Our powers growing fast," Fortissimo started to sing as he began to tell his fellow Blasters in song as to where things would go from here. "But when these ponies do fight back... It'll be a blast!"

"So, what you're saying is-" Allegro said before he was cut off by Fortissimo again.

"That we'll get our little sisters back on the Siren side and together, we'll bring back all the Sirens who were slaughtered at the hands and hooves of humans and ponies..." He said, rubbing his pendants, making them expel Siren Magic.

"We were ambushed, assassinated. Outnumbered and outmatched," he sang, making bizarre movements with his hands and feet as if her was leaping and performing professional parkour moves. "We were so close to keeping our home, but our victory was snatched..."

"But the plan I have is genius, when The Dazzlings grow strong. We'll teach them the ways of power and all the rights from wrong."

"The Furen's ways of seething hate..." he said, using his hands to make a magical screen showing people getting really angry at one another, expelling Siren magic. He then changed the screen to show everyone getting along wonderfully, yet still expelling Siren Magic. "The Blissens making unity great..."

"With these two ways, we can't go wrong," he sang, as Allegro and Orchestral came up to his side and threw up their arms with him. "It's our Siren Song!"

"Now these other lives may seem innocent, and worth a second chance..." Fortissimo turned around and walked back into the centre of the stage again, with Allegro and Orchestral close behind him. "But the truth behind these others, will leave you in a trance."

"With our pendants and our magic, we are sure to know success." Allegro added on his words to that of Fortissimo's, making it seem like The Blasters were all singing together, instead of separately.

"And when the Spirits do come running, it's The Dazzlings we'll caress..." Fortissimo said with his devilish smile as he bent hit front knee forward in a running pose and opened his backhand out wide like a talon.

"Our sisters running to our arms..." he sang as the three Sirens pulled out lockets with pictures of Adagio, Aria and Sonata in the middle of them all before putting them away for the next line in the song. "The screams they'll make, when they do harm..."

"Our girls will return before long," he sang on further as he now floated in midair as his two pendants glowed brightly, as if he was about to transform into his Siren form. "With our Siren Song!"

"Adagio might be young, but Fortissimo's still a man, to show the TRUE leaders here." he said as he stopped himself from floating, but still had his pendants glowing. "To teach the worlds that the SIRENS are creatures that must be feared..."

"Soon, my little sister. You wonderful Aria Blaze..." Allegro said once Fortissimo returned to the rest of the group, who now hovered in the air once more, only much higher this time.

"One day when you're back with us..." Orchestral sang, finally making the song a group song instead of a duet.

"Lyrica will raze!" he sang as all three of The Blasters were cocooned in balls of red and blue light which were all about to burst open, revealing their true forms underneath.

"The sound of destruction, returning once more!" He said as The Blasters gained pony ears and hair extensions, just like when The Dazzlings transformed back at CHS. "The Sirens are the ones to adore!"

"To all these humans!" Allegro said, throwing his fist up once The Blasters gained their dragon wings at last and flew up with Fortissimo. He called out to all the people in the town who had just noticed this magic.

"Sing along!" Orchestral added on to the drama of this song.

"With our growing powers..." Fortissimo sang, stopping himself even higher in the sky, yet retaining his height as he stopped.

"Sirens will stand strong!" Allegro and Orchestral said as they high-fived each other in mid-air.

"A world where we will tower, over both the weak and strong. These fools will ALL belong..." He said, clearing the skies with red and blue streams of Siren magic from his pendants, revealing a red and blue moon in the sky.

"To our Siren Soooooooooooooooooong!!!" The three of them all finished together, letting their magic stream forward into dozens upon dozens of Furen and Blissen Summons. There were Hippocampi, Cerberuses, Manticores, Hydras and The Blasters' main summon; Dragons. There were also some creatures of Blissen origins, such as Angels, Knights and even a few Judges with heavenly scales of death and life. While all their beasts came forth, The Blasters shared in an evil laugh which only grew as they sent their beasts to the other ends of the world, to do their bidding...

To Be Continued...

Author's Note:

Thanks for reading the END of Dazzle Dazzle, Little Stars. This story's been quite a big ride for me with the introduction of The Blasters and all. Now, before I leave you all, I have one last question for you: What was your favourite chapter of this story, and why?

If you liked this story, be sure to give it all your upvotes and send it to all your friends and family. They could all read such a great story, given the chance. Now then, before I start with the first sequel: Razzle Dazzle, I need to go back over the other chapters and snipe out some errors. I may also decide to be a little more descriptive in my chapters that I already finished if that's what you wish of me.

Now then, I need to stop typing before Lau- (Levitates me away from computer and wraps me up in blanket)

Lauren: Alright, Shadowmane. That's enough playing on your computer for the day.

Me: But Gwandma...

Lauren: No buts, little one. Unless you'd like to be spanked like naughty Tia and Lulu over here (Looks over at Celestia and Luna, crying from what seemed like a spank.)

Me: Otay...

Lauren: There's a good foal... (Levitates pacifier into my mouth.)

Comments ( 33 )

Since when am I a baby? I mean... uh... goo goo?

Uh oh! Looks like I got 15 chapters if catching up to do...and I still don't get how you fit 10 hairstyles into one persons hair! I started experimenting at bit, but it just looked plain weird...:applejackunsure: (Continue this in PMs)

That song they did reminded me a lot like the lullaby from Lion King 2.

Ooooh. Do I foresee a sequel coming. Great chapter. I have a feeling that Sunset and Twilight's influence on the girls will help them stay strong against their former brethren. Hope to see the next st-... Zzzzzzzzzzzzz.

Grandma Lauren: *Wraps up the bag of star dust.* Sorry dear, but it's naptime. New stories will have to wait.

Me: No, I no wanna go to da Gala. Zzzzzzzzz.

5330157 It is actually the same song, but more of The Blasters doing their words to it.

At first I thought you were going to cancel it

5329960 It might have been funny, if it wasn't put on the LAST chapter.

NICE!!! I can't wait for the sequel to the story. :pinkiehappy:

5330608 I didn't even open up the chapter. How odd it is that it said that I commented on it...

5330157 IKR! Its so strange! That tune instantly leapt into my head and I didn't know what song it wa, but I used that tune and sang the song and it sounded kinda like My Lullaby.

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I believe that if you comment on the main page of the story, it counts your comment as being on the most recent chapter.

NOOOOO DONT LEAAAAAAAAAAVE!!!

Wow, just.... wow. I am really impressed with this my friend. It had everything I could expect and more. I really don't like the dazzlings so when I saw this I thought I wasn't going to enjoy myself but this is some brilliant stuff. I just binged this story because I wanted to keep reading. People yelling at me to get stuff done but I couldn't because I was engrossed in the story

Well done for a great story

5472925 Nah, breaking the fourth wall is Pinkie's job remember?

Comment posted by Kobitsu deleted Jan 20th, 2015

5532453 The reason I do all these foalish adventures is because Night--Mist pulled me into his story. My Little Foals: Friendship Is Padded.

Now when me and Night--Mist finish chapters, we like to have little foalish adventures in the author's notes.

Comment posted by Shadowmane PX-41 deleted Feb 8th, 2015

Hello again. I've reviewed the beginning of this story, and I have a few problems with it: namely I don't know what it's trying to do, and because of this it isn't really doing it well enough. On one hand, it seems to be focussing on the Dazzlings as children, which isn't set up very neatly, and then switches to adventure the next, without taking the time to really foreshadow anything or set that up either.

For these reasons, I'm rejecting the story from Olympus for now. Longer review is here, but I've summed up most of everything above.

5694427 there'll be more to it when you read the sequels...

Do you do your own title cards?

5717214 No. This one was made by Keam.

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That makes it sound like you have done some of your title cards. Have you?

5717287 I'm not an artist. I lack the talent to make good artwork, so I strike a deal with some bronies on Art for Fanfiction, and they hook me up once they're finished with it.

Finished reviewing (again), but this time for the Goodfic bin. Like last time, rejecting from submissions.

Details are here.

no offense, but I think you should change the cover art. The other cover art is much better.

After reading the story and before I read the sequel...

I can see a solution to their problems, a magnum .44 and a head shot, let's see if the pendants can stop that, or maybe a little un-lethal, just a little sleep drug in the drink and take the amulets to Equestria, no amulets no problem after all.

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That they are.

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Have Twilight and Sunset use more fitting dialogue, and have the Dazzlings ask what those words mean.

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Twilight, for all her strengths, often suffers from tunnel vision and gets caught up in details. Her not making the connection actually makes sense, though it does stretch credibility if no one pointed it out sooner.

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