I am liking this story I made a decision to reread for the beginning for a refresher and I am glad I did. this story is vary good it seams to be building yet and putting al the player in to play before the mane story hits. I will be watching this vary closely as I think this is going to turn in to a rather good story. yes it is a hie story but it different at the same time. if any thing I would make the chapters a bit shorter maybe let of at a cliffhanger. I say keep going you are doing a good job Blackfox1990. happy righting and pony on Harts Fire
I hope we get to see more fluff moments with him and the girls
I loved it!, i hope the next chapters to be good like this.
I am liking this story I made a decision to reread for the beginning for a refresher and I am glad I did.
this story is vary good it seams to be building yet and putting al the player in to play before the mane story hits.
I will be watching this vary closely as I think this is going to turn in to a rather good story.
yes it is a hie story but it different at the same time.
if any thing I would make the chapters a bit shorter maybe let of at a cliffhanger.
I say keep going you are doing a good job Blackfox1990.
happy righting and pony on
Harts Fire
Thank you all for the nice reviews/comments so far.
I will gladly work to improve myself and give you even greaters chapters in the future (hopefully )
It must suck to have your problems and possible encounters trivialized just because you're rather young.