Yer uh wizard 'arry! It could do with a few adjustments here and there in how some of it is phrased but for this not being your original language it's fairly good.
I am so sorry for the delay. I had some decent problems and after I finished the part I wasnt quiet happy with it and so the chapter is currently in rework status (75% done) so expect the next chapter soon.
nice begin
Yer uh wizard 'arry! It could do with a few adjustments here and there in how some of it is phrased but for this not being your original language it's fairly good.
4842397 I will do it as soon as I can. I promise :)
4842097 Thanks for beeing honest . If you like you could send me a PM and tell me some examples where I went wrong. Would help me a lot.
4841921 Thank you
I am so sorry for the delay. I had some decent problems and after I finished the part I wasnt quiet happy with it and so the chapter is currently in rework status (75% done) so expect the next chapter soon.