Crusade
"Oh gods.... oh gods no! No please no..."
"Ah'm s-so sorry... it's all mah fault..."
"D-don't say that!"
"But it is... ah was in the wrong place at the wrong time. Causin' trouble like always."
"That don't matter, don't blame it on yerself! Blame me! It was me!"
"Hey sis...?"
"Y-yeah?"
"Do me a favor will ya."
"Anything... absolutely anything, sis!"
"Smile."
"You can't die! You just can't! Please don't leave me!"
"There's nothing we can do."
"No, there has to be a way!"
"I really wish I didn't have to die... but there's one favor I have to ask you..."
"You're not going to die... but what is it, darling?"
"If Spike ever goes back to his normal self... tell him that I..."
"You what darling?"
"Tell him that I like... no, tell him I love him, please."
"This... is so not cool..."
"Don't cry, you're too awesome to cry."
"I'm not awesome, kid..."
"Yes you are! You're the awesomest pony ever."
"Kid... I know you idolize me... and I hate to be such a mess of tears and emptiness in your final moments, but..."
"I-it's okay. I'm gonna miss you too. I'm scared, really scared, but there's nothing I can do."
"I understand kid... be brave. I'm scared of every monster that I face..."
"Really?"
"Yeah, really. But I always face them with my head held high."
"Hey R-... sis?"
"Yeah?"
"I love you..."
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Ouch, my heart! I just got away from the demon fox's singing and you take the chance to shoot me in the heart! Nothing much here to discuss besides these kids facing death more calmly than I think I could. Then again, thinking about how this all could've been avoided if Sweetie spoke up before Spike fell off the deep end sounds like a good idea to me. Having one person who undeniably loved him would've warded off the insanity, like a candle in the Dark (Puns!)
Wow... that was a shot straight to the feels! And so soon after the last chapter! Dear sweet Luna this is getting good!
Wow, what is wrong with me? I didn't felt a thing reading these past two chapters.
6123454 And, oddly enough, I felt nothing writing them. I usually do, but for some reason, I was more like "Eh".
6123554 Seem like we both are stone hearted my good sir.
6123655 Yup...Excep that I'm a girl... though I don't mind being called 'sir', just as long as you know my actual gender.
6123871 Excuse me, I go with the "Everyone is a guy until proven otherwise" around on the net.
6123919 That's pretty much how it goes online, I understand. I really don't mind.
6127355 I know, we're so awesome, aren't we?
Also, FED EX!
First
ugh SweetieXSpike... Oh well. Doesn't matter anyways.
Second. Semi feels. (Sorry I've been reading too much sadness recently.)
This is a really sweet info chapter here to tear our hearts out while telling us the most adorable things in existence have ceased living.
And. Oh Damn Spike's got all the ladies lovin him in this series. First Rarity admits she loves him just to be rejected by a Spiteful Spike, the Spike starts liking Scoots, then there's Sweetie with that heart wrenching death bed admission into the Love-Spike lottery.
But in all seriousness with all these ponies that either liked Spike or vice versa it's a little weird that Spike didn't act on anything and they didn't act on anything. Could have (maybe) prevented this entire tragedy.
6127474 He gave up on love and the others either didn't feel that way or were too scared to confront them. Nobody stepped up, causing this whole mess to happen. Even if they had said their feelings for each other and became a ship, I would've still found a way to make Spike still go crazy and kill them. Though the ending might be much different.