• Member Since 11th Aug, 2012
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Redemption


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I kinda wanna see more

4850813 To be honest, I'm considering making this longer...

4851341 you should

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Alright, I'll do it. :raritywink:

The pacing's a bit weird, and I would've really liked to know the actual problem the other guy had, along with some examples of Peter's arguments, but otherwise it's pretty enjoyable.

4864344 Thank you for pointing that out. I'll try to focus on fixing these issues in the next chapter.

So glad I found this story again, I loved the first chapter but didn't favorite it since I though it was a one shot

This is interesting.

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