A mother's love, a daughter's passion, and a destiny neither of them could've predicted. Just how much is love and life destined in Equestria and just how will it effect the lives of the two ponies connected the most through destiny?
Loving the story so far! Consensual foalcon romance is the best And I don't think I've ever seen Twilight and Sweetie paired before. I look forward to seeing how their personalities interact
I don't, however, look forward to the futa stuff... but hopefully there'll be enough proper lesbian sex to keep me happy, or I can just skip the clop and read it for the romance.
Also, I've noticed quite a few typos so far... want me to list them as I go? Two for this chapter:
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And the whole chapter seems to be copy/pasted twice, except for the last chunk with Twilight and Sweetie. I don't want to seem like a grumpy nitpicker, because I really don't care much about minor technical errors in a good story, but I don't mind helping to fix them either, if you want
Loving the story so far! Consensual foalcon romance is the best And I don't think I've ever seen Twilight and Sweetie paired before. I look forward to seeing how their personalities interact
I don't, however, look forward to the futa stuff... but hopefully there'll be enough proper lesbian sex to keep me happy, or I can just skip the clop and read it for the romance.
Also, I've noticed quite a few typos so far... want me to list them as I go? Two for this chapter:
mine
I'm
And the whole chapter seems to be copy/pasted twice, except for the last chunk with Twilight and Sweetie. I don't want to seem like a grumpy nitpicker, because I really don't care much about minor technical errors in a good story, but I don't mind helping to fix them either, if you want
Another paste error after this part:
Again, just delete the first duplicate and it will be fixed.
The polyamory is really heartwarming and a wonderful solution for the 2 couples!
Also, cute nicknames!
Those cute little nick names<3