When Princess Cadance, and Captain Shining Armor, banished the Changelings from Canterlot, the force of love blasted them out. That blast was strongest near the source and weaker as it went farther out, so the Changelings near the end of the city were unharmed, the Changelings near the source did not return. That group included there beloved Queen Chrysalis.
Wow.
Ive been reading alot of changeling stories lately because I like them,
But this is the first that talks about the changelings that survived unscathed from the banishment, and their tale.
You've done me proud.
Short and Sad. A well thought out story, I never thought of changelings having feelings.
Hmm... tis a pity.
And people wonder why i hate the princesses.
Just a suggestion: spellcheck your description several times. Errors in the description turn off picky readers before they even read it.
There are a lot of fics causing bad things to happen to Chrysalis lately...
So while the Queen and her inner circle of soldiers live it up off the love of cute little kittens (Comic Continuity), the civilians starve to death.
While the Queen feasts upon their victim's capacity for love, the civilians are denied the ambient love that the Ponies should have been giving freely.
While the Queen hungers for revenge and conquest, the civilians simply hunger, abandoned and forgotten.
...yeah, you earned your "Sad" tag here.
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I've opened the floodgates, it seems.
Oh my, so much feels.
I'm glad that so many of you seam to like it.
I'm trying to wright another sad Fic, but I can't think of who it should be about. I try to avoid the main six my personal rule. Does anypony have a suggestion?
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Something ironic and original.
Things like Pinkie Pie, the princesses, Diamond Tiara/Silver Spoon, etc. There all over-written a bit in my book.
Why.. why do i keep getting shot with the feels arrows! this made me sad! good read though
4824480 WHY DO YOU HAVE TO GUT ME RIGHT IN THE FEELS? WRITE A HAPPY ENDING ABOUT THIS PLEASE!!!
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Happy ending aren't really my forte.
So be warned.
5621304 That's cool... I mean... well you know... heh.
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I'm sorry to say, but, after thinking over it, through several days, I've come to the conclusion that this is a story that was meant to end in (hopefully) tears. I don't see any way to re-wright, add on, or edit this sorry to a happy ending without reducing the power of the story itself.
If I find a way to do it, I will. But it's not going to be a problem that I'm working constantly to solve and I don't know when, or if, I'm even going to write it.
5638966 thats fine.
Great one-shot, I actually almost teared up a bit. There were some small spelling and grammatical issues, but nothing too bad.
~Crystalline Electrostatic~
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I'm glad that you enjoyed it.
I'm still looking for more one-shot ideas, if you have any.
Sad but there is still hope she is still a live some were
I'm touch!
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Could make story continuation
Like, changelings are so close to Extinction that they come to Princess Celestia asking for help