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MichelleTwistaloo


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Trigger Warning: I feel obligated by my own morals and stuff to warn that this story talks about some kind of sexual assalt, well, kind of,. t's not graphic, and there are no mares not consenting, but it techincally counts, since, well, drinks were involved.

Vinyl Scratch really did one tonight! She and Octavia got involved, drinks were involved, and now she feels anguish about it, this story is an exploration of her feelings.

It's my first story feauturing a "sex" tag, and I'm kind of nervous about it, despite not having a lemon or anything, feel free do add it to any groups you'd like! (I really don't say that in the description nearly enough, but you can always do it, with any sort of story I write)

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Nice and short. It dose need some editing though.

In just the last paragraph for example:
- mixed up tenses
- strange punctuation
- you don't run out of people (at least not in this case)

4800959 Ah yes, I was trying to write something like "run away from, or escape from", not "running out of", well, that's silly of my part

Aww :applecry: that was short, but well done. as a fan of Vinyl and Octavia, this defiantly gets me. Have a like (even if I'm sad now)

But.... what.... no.... i didn't look to see if there was gonna be more or not, so it made this much worse for me...

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