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Sparlight_Twikle


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After Pinkie's party, two ponies come to the library asking for advice. One is Big Macintosh, who starts feeling something towards Fluttershy. The second one is Fluttershy, who just discovered she's pregnant. Will Twilight fulfill her friend's request? What will be the consequences of her decision? What happens to a pony, when she commits a crime and cannot bear the burden of guilt?

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 22 )

The first chapter is somewhat less serious than the remaining ones, so don't expect any kind of happy end. It was written before I had any idea how the story will end, so I wrote it in a more light-hearted tone than the rest.

Next chapter: late Sunday/early Monday.

...This is 'light-hearted'?

dude wtf dark a bit too dark i mean angel the forth dropping some bunnies in a pond abortions?

dear god this is getting darker and darker by every chapter not complaining about you writing your awsome at it but man this gets depressing, but nicely done with the feelings and reactions.

Dark fic is dark. :unsuresweetie:

I actually really enjoyed that, regardless that everyone was seriously OOC. :pinkiehappy:
And the last 3 chapters updated at once? Just made my day

Damn that was DARK. :pinkiesad2: Poor Flutters. Chapter 4 really threw me off haha.

Wow....that may actually have the capeability to kick "Cupcakes"-

:pinkiegasp:

Er...bum. Anyway, that was a very dark fanfic, very believable. Have you ever thought of submitting it to Equestria Daily? I'm sure they'd find it interesting.

It gave me an all new asspect of TwilightSparkle :twilightoops: and FlutterShy :fluttershysad:.

Poor AppleJack, I nearly cried when that happened. :ajsleepy:

And where the buck was Celestia during all of this!? LOL! :trollestia:

:heart: Nicely done!

I totally completely agree with fanskapet very good story

holy shit twi has gone CRAZY! like Pinkie Pie crazy Ex::pinkiecrazy:

To the athuor: WTF YOU SICK BASTARD!!BUT I MUST SAY I FUCKING LOVED IT!!!! I was like :fluttercry: when Fluttershy DIES CUZ SHE WAS "MURDERD" BY TWILIGHT also :fluttercry: when Applejack "DIES". Seriously WTF man.

Also please excuse my language I just didnt know what else to put

To everyone read my comment on ch.4 and to the athuor WTF

:fluttercry: im dead??


why me WHY COULDNT IT BE SPIKE?
oh nvm:facehoof:

The whiplash was trolltastic. :pinkiehappy:

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