Sick, bro.

This popped up in my notifications and I was like "Wait, it's Friday, that means... OHHHHHHHHHH SHIIIIIIIIIIIT YEEEEEEEEEEEEES!"
I'm going to read the ever loving fuck out of this tonight.

4891926 Wow that's... Kinda of depressing if you think about it

High Five. Myself. No friends.

4891904 The worst part is I saw an R34 pic

4892228 My life is very fulfilling.

Interesting chapter, I'll be waiting for the next.

So good chapter. Hope Twilight can tell her whole family what she and Night Light did before the vacation. I sense a fatal attraction reference somewhere in this story.

Oh my yesh.

SO far, so good.

~Skeeter The Lurker

You'd think by now I'd be used to having to wait. I'm not but I want to see where this goes.

I've noticed that the Sparkle family in general reminds me of Zuko's family. Like, they're not similar in personality or anything, it's just a weird reminder. It's just... weird... y'know? X3 lolz

pssshhh...nothinpersonnel...kid...

But that was good, please give us more.

Oh god yes. I can't wait to read this

Will read later but it's going to suck for Twilight Velvet.

Mmmmmmmhhhmmmm

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Oh god. It all ends with Twilight trying to stab everyone. Let's hope not!

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I'll do my best to get new chapters out asap.

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I've... I've never watched avatar...

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Pretty much. The only real question is how much it's going to suck.

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4894196 Finding out your husband is with your own daughter that you've had together and raised, not to mention how much of a psychological of feeling cheated on and replaced by a younger mare of your own blood it going to do a number on her. I highly doubt she's going to react well to this, or be friends with any of them in the end.

4894201 Unless, of course, she's the one who suggested Night Light go to the club.

4894223 even if she gave him permissioin to cheat, it's doubtful she meant for him to hook up with their daughter.

The Sparkle family are going on vacation

That should be: The Sparkle family IS going on vacation.

You have to use the word is because the word family is singular. You wouldn't say: My family are going on vacation, you'd say: My family is going on vacation.

Wow, Twilight...Just wow...

s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-s-SEQUEL!?

OH FUCK YES!!! READING NOW! :D

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4894196 Heeeeeeeeeres TWILEY! *axe-shot*

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Actually, I would say that. In British English, collective noun pluralisation is common. It really depends on emphasis as to which is used over here, and by using the plural it distances Twilight from it to reflect her opinion of the whole thing.

4894826 Huh. Well, whaddya know? That's good to know

hooo boy...

Well, Twilight's fucked, and not in the good way. All that has to happen is for Night Light to thank Velvet for the good time in the bathroom and things will get awkward.

Oooh good to see this out and about! Good work on it!

My, how the tables have turned..........

I don't really care to read this, but who's the artist?

that... was... um, holy shit. yeah excuse me I must go...uhhh do a thing. yeah yeah a thing! *five minutes later* phew yeah! that thing... was really important! ehehehehehe
....dear lord above the next chapter can't come (ha ha) any sonner.

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Fair enough. The artist is awesomecoolwhip. I usually link straight to the source image, but the original for this one has been deleted so I couldn't in this instance.

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Indeed. If Night Light didn't somehow realize the truth, it'll all be out of the bag the minute he comments on it to Velvet.

I like this fic so far, but I hope the reveal won't be as predictable as Night Light just asking Velvet about the bathroom thingie.

The prequel was awesome, so I hope this lives up to it.

4895365 Seems like incest.
More into the the Shining armor kind if I was to read it.

4894223 or, it could make it infinitely worse, because adding a helping of guilt from an "i caused this" mindset is really going to help matters.

this will get bad fast if she doesnt talk to someone...

4893158 Is that...
no way...
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Aww yiss. Show me dat inner turmoil. Oh yeah, shamefuck your father, just like that. unf.

4897714 I had actually switched my avatar for a day. Here's my blog to tell you about it.

pssshhh...nothinpersonnel...kid...

Okay author. Author. We need to sit down and talk about this for a minute here. Okay? Okay.

*ahem* I was not aware that this was a sequel that I wanted. However! I now realize that my life is incomplete without more of this delicious, delicious, lustful inner turmoil on Twilight's part. With that said....

MOAR. Because not only is the concept intriguing, you have distinct skills with writing. I'm tired so I'm not going to go into details, but let me just say that you've 'got it down', if you know what I mean.

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Thank you. I can wait, it's just good parts make it hard to put down. And then? To be continued nooooooo.....

4896032 And how do you suppose she does that? Literally everyone she could talk to would flip the fuck out!

Velvet: "Hey mom, guess what? Your husband cheated on you a few weeks ago! IT WAS WITH ME!"

Night Light: "Remember a few weeks ago when you fucked that mare with a blindfold on? Well, guess who?"

Shining: :So, you know our dad, right? Well, he cheated on mom. I know, crazy, right? Well, turns out it was with me."

Cadance: "So, I think you'd understand this the most, being the princess of love and all, but what do I do to prevent myself from wanting to fuck my father every five minutes?"

Need I continue?

Yes! A fantastic start so far!

I'm silently crying at how good this fic is and how shameful it must be to be her in place

.... Oh wells, MOAR

This family of unicorns is f@cking awesome. Its only gonna get better from here.

Don't worry Twilight I'm sure your family will be ok with you banging your dad wait maybe not. How about giant family orgy no that's not it. Cadence naughty babysitter? Uhhh... yea you're kinda f@cked. I've only read one other story with Night Light. So far I really like your version of him.

This story is awesome so far. The prequel was fantastic and this is shaping up to be one hell of a series. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I always feel kinda sad whenever one of these stories deals with cheating. Strangely enough, the incest never bothers me at all but the cheating does.

Who else feels sorry for Twilight Velvet? Hopefully Night Light will make it up to her.

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I actually feel sorry for everybody involved in this, including the author and readers

The story's absolutely gripping. Poor, poor Twilgiht.