Twilight Sparkle gets wind of tensions rising between Princess Luna, and Princess Celestia, as her closely guarded secrets of manipulating Princess Luna to gain full power over the throne of Equestria, and be rid of her to the moon. Twilight must protect the Elements of Harmony to stop the sisters from destroying Equestria in their war fuelled hate, but the past reveals to twilight that not all is as it seems. Who can she trust? Can she tell Dash of her growing feelings towards the rainbow pegasus before it is too late?
Not too shabby for your first story. Good work.