Life of Sin

by Thyrai

IX.

I went on a trip to see my dad. I don’t ever recall telling him that I loved him, but I did today.

Comments

[Feo Takahari]

I can't say I understand the title. Or the final words, for that matter. Still, it feels very much like Rainbow Dash's voice.

[SomeponyTheVectorer]

This was a very nice story. I'm not sure if it should have ended so abruptly, but hey, sequel fodder, right? Lol. Nice work.

[BronyPonyMan]

sequel?

[Timaeus]

A short, cute, and interesting little exploration into Rainbow Dash's mind. I think that the ending there may have been a little abrupt, but it was an enjoyable read nonetheless! It was simple in a lot of ways, but that made it all the better.

Like this line:

She drives me nuts in all the right ways

I adore this line. It's so simple, and not necessarily that special, but it's perfect. Very well done!

[Alamandir]

4783178 The ending is a reference to the beginning when she said she had asked her father not to read to her anymore because she was ashamed.

[Nyronus]

I liked it.

Fuck it, I loved it. I especially loved the ending. I don't think it needs a sequel at all, and your choice of ending really made sense to me. You captured Dash and Twilight very well.

This needs to be featured. It is glorious.

[ssjgokillo]

Not gonna lie, I almost didn't read this. Saw the word count on the chapters and figured this wouldn't be for me. I was decidedly wrong. This was a great story, the diary format giving us a window into Rainbow Dash's world, and how she's grown and dealt with changes. While I would have liked to see a bit more in the romance department, all and all I'd say this was a great fic.

Have a like and a fav!

[JoeyH3]

I loved it! It was happy and sad at the same time, and I enjoyed the glimpse into Rainbow's thoughts!

[Phxntxm]

The story was good but it could definitely be continued, I hope you have plans for a sequel

[Fluffy-Mixer]

Good story. I thought it was pretty good, but some spelling and grammar errors. If you want me to point them out, PM me and I'll reply the edits.

P.S: Have a like!

[Winston]

The story ends a bit abruptly, and I'd like to see a sequel or a continuation of where this is going. What's here is a really great introspective on Rainbow Dash, though! I enjoyed it greatly.

Have this ribbon:
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[aRestlessCreativeGamer]

This was a very good story. It was short, sweet and adorable.

[Lavender_Raindrops]

Probably one of the best Dash fics I've ever read. It was beautiful.

[Alicorn Capony]

I really like how self aware and humble Dash is in this. The way she writes makes her feel small and vulnerable. I love the premise of her getting better at expressing herself, too. One of the things about Dash that makes her a likable character for me is her fear of what others think. This fic is just great.

Before today, I don't think I'd read one of your fics in years, but I still remembered your name and how much I like your writing. I'm glad I came back to find one that I hadn't read.

[Thyrai]

7334688 Hey thanks for both your comments! I definitely feel the same way. I've always seen RD as a very insightful and empathetic character, even if she doesn't show it - out of fear and/or inability to express herself

[Lortee]

I find myself re-reading this story every once in a while and I swear it just keeps getting better and better.

[Alicorn Capony]

Just re-read this. Funny that it's been almost exactly 2 years since I first read it. I plan to re-read it again once I've forgotten most of the details 'cause it's just such a nice read.

[LurkingToRead]

How can you call this complete?! Nice story, but it ain’t done. Objectively, it ain’t done.