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Caught in a downpour, Palette, a pony blind to the visual world, befriends Hilt, a pony who daydreams of worlds beyond what anyone can see. Spending time together, he breathes life into a fantastic world she can imagine, and almost see. But can a bridge between that which is seen and that which cannot see ever be strong enough to hold two?
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I'm rather dissapointed that nobody has bothered to provide any feedback on such a unique story. I don't recall reading a story about a blind pony before, so this was a very unusual read. While I enjoyed the story and how things were described from Palette Brush's point of view. While there are a few things that could be improved I still think that this story is worthy of praise.
Despite focusing on two OC ponies I still think that this definitely a clever concept with a heartfelt tale. Well done.
4816726 Thank you! I'm glad someone enjoys reading this :) Yeah, I definitely agree there are many things that could be improved. Apologies if its not up to scratch as this is a very unique story for me to tackle, I wanted to challenge myself and put my skills out of the comfort zone :P
Hope you look forward to the remaining chapters!
Well... I'll be brutally honest here. I've read the revamped story and I believe that This fic deserves a lot more attention than it has. It's well written, gives Palette decent characterisation and has her being very realistic and relateable. Her thoughts reveL just how a life of dealing with her blindness and the way others treat her and her panic when some random stranger loterally whiskes her off to an unknown location are both very believable and I'm left wanting more.
Here's hoping you can find time to continue this fic
it's so satisfying to stare at the cover art. This story is inspiring me to write a similar story.