Set shortly before the first episode of Friendship is Magic, Daughters follows a young pony who is convicted of a crime she doesn't remember committing. When Princess Celestia finds that she has amnesia as well, she sends the pony on a quest to sovle this strange puzzle. After some investigation(with help from Twilight Sparkle), Celestia realizes that this event hides a force that could threaten to tear all of Equestria apart.
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I'm liking this so far, and really want to see more! Well written, great description, and the amnesia adds a level of mystery I really am enjoying. Keep it up and provide us with MOAR!
I really like what you'v set up here! Tracking
I like where this is going, but perhaps put it in an 'alternate universe' tag? Looks like it's going to divert from the canon storyline, but I'm looking forward to where you take this! Good chapter, keep up the good work
@CamoBadger:
I did consider using the AU tag to avoid confusion when I first posted the story, but decided against it. While I understand your concern, I want to make it clear that this DOES take place within FiM's canon, and any diversions can and will be explained within the course of the story.
That is, if my lazy a** ever manages to finish it.
Still loving this story man, keep up the great work! The only thing I would like to see is perhaps a little more description in scenery or feelings from the characters. This would add length, give the reader a better idea of what is around the characters, as well as help bring out the characters a little more.
Still, amazing story, and I can't wait to see more of it!
Hey Charlie, it's me JTA. Hmm, this is interesting. good job