A man with no way to leave decides that saving a dark princess is worth more than the temptations of the dark... But can he save her from the same darkness he has forsaken for her? Meet DARTH Corpus... A man of almost intangible powers as he marches
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Not bad, not bad. I dare say this is a great intimate scene you did for your first time at writing it! Huzzah! Though, I mean when they truly were about to 'go at it', the sudden cut off left much to be desired. That's just me though, many may argue against that type of detail. All in all....7/10?
be should be art according to ye olde tongue. (Yes, I spelled olde the olde fashioned way)
Raped has one p, not two.
Nice go at an intimacy scene, as well.
I can skip this right
I thought he was 8'3"...
In ch 6
I was right...