A man with no way to leave decides that saving a dark princess is worth more than the temptations of the dark... But can he save her from the same darkness he has forsaken for her? Meet DARTH Corpus... A man of almost intangible powers as he marches
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The love is in the air... Nope, I can never say it with a straight face.
5083788 Lol Yeah... Awkward shite everywhere!
5083860 I can never say any lovey dovey shite like that without various thoughts springing up and making it either hilarious or horrifying.
5083897 Trust me... I felt like saying soooo many things while writing this.... But, as they say... tough shit! XD So I just wrote it how it would have happened... In my own mind anyway lol.
Any thoughts on what I could have done better?
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Critique?... Sorry but because of how my thought patterns work, it would take me hours if not days to think up a single thing to write. Still, this is a great story so far, it is currently in my top ten somewhere and considering how much I read, that's an achievement.
*sees army*
Let it begin
5084102 Thank you for that amazing compliment! I also understand the whole thing about writing a critique... Writing a story is better than that most times XD
But either way I love that you always give me some kind of feedback on my chapters, its very appreciated!