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Rinnaul


I do nothing of merit. On occasion, I give the impression of being creative, but this is a deception. I am merely derivative in clever ways.

Comments ( 47 )

Haven't read it yet but I already like your idea.

*looks at title*

Twi's not going to spill her coffee and get third-degree burns, is she?

Worst moment for Spike to walk in; When Twilight moves her tail for her magic dildo. Try explaining that bookworm! :twilightoops:

The worst time for Spike to walk in? At the same time the rest of her friends do!

We need a sequel with Hazelnut coming to visit Twilight. Please:fluttershysad:

read..favd...ask for..possible sequal with Hazelnut showing up at the library?

Hazelnut came to ponyville to visit then they wound up fucking, and spike walked in on it.

This was hot! I really liked it. I wish I could read more about hazelnut and joe.

It would suck for Spike to walk in after she was done, and miss everything.

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I agree. This was just too great not to have one.

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Thanks for that. My usual proofreader won't touch clop, and I couldn't drag anyone from the review group Skype chat into it.

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I thought about a longer sequel where they get back together. I was thinking that Hazelnut had to move back home (Baltimare or Manehattan) not long before Twilight went to Ponyville, and neither had the other's new address. I go with each season of the show being one year, so it's been a little over three years since they were together.

Might happen, but I make no promises as to when. I have a couple adventure stories to do first.

4799398 Omg I just finished reading A Mile High in the Summer Sky and this pic... god it adds up :pinkiecrazy:

4798852 Heh. It's the title. Was a documentary/video about the specifics behind that one McDonalds incident.

4798906 I don't usually proofread, but if you're having trouble finding someone, I'd be happy to do it.

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It's fine. I usually have my wife look things over for me, but she won't read clop or gore. For those, I can usually get a few friends on here to do it for me, but I was posting this on short notice and none of them were available.

Yanno im as pervy as the next guy but i really gotta say i was rather hoping for more cute twily/hazel interaction.
your style made that incredibly enjoyable to read. I could see those two together chatting away whilst hazel messed with twilights head.
If these characters had a running clopless fic i would gleefully read it. I love cute sensual ship fics more than pretty much any straight guy over 35 should. Dont get me wrong here though,good clop,very good. One for The File even but damnit i found myself kinda sad that it was all reminiscence of an old lover,someone not seen in a long time. I'd like to someday read them longform.
Anyway enough rambling from me,have a fave. Fuck it i loved this,have a follow too.

4800379 No problem. Great story by the way. Sadly lacking the use of any puns about donut holes, but you can't have everything.

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I'll work those into a sequel whenever I get around to it.

4801346 Depends entirely on how their done. And whether you prefer good or bad ones. :pinkiehappy:

4802201 Ok I did and wow. Twilight is such a dirty naughty mare, that was fun.:twilightsmile:

Not bad at all.

~Skeeter The Lurker

I wouldn't mind a sequel that goes over the events around the time of the memories she is remembering. You should do that, a sequel that is really a prequel but is intended to be read after this fic.

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

I've read squishier stories, but this one was nice and sticky. It's official; Alicorns have the best sex, having both wings and magic to stimulate themselves with. There's also the (theoretical) immortality, so that's an eternity of feathers and telekinesis. (And me with only my hands. Sigh)
I like this. Keep it up.

memories of a pretty mare who worked the morning shift at Donut Joe's while Twilight was still at Celestia's School

Ooh, I like this explanation! I haven't read this yet, though, so my opinion may change.

I think it was great. If you would, it would be awesome to see a romance story about Twilight and Hazelnut, with some occasional clop in it, particularly the part that Twilight was remembering as she masturbated.

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Not sure when, because I have a bunch of other stuff going on, too (latest blog post lays all of that out), but eventually...

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4808231 Cool! Can't wait to read them and good luck. :pinkiesmile:

Your writing style is absolutely mint! Well done!

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Read it. Wow, this had more than I expected!

Oh wow... I love this story. I think it's beautifully written, starting out very cute and sweet and ends with a good clop scene.

I really like Hazelnut and I hope that you'll tell more about her and Twilight's relationship in the future. I enjoy this so much and you have earned a fav and a follow from me. :twilightsmile::heart:

I'll be looking forward to see more off your work. good job.

4797943 Nay! The worst part for spike to walk in would be right just as she finished or a little earlier perhaps.

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No, not really. I'm not only terrible at keeping to deadlines, but I've been barely writing at all lately. As in, over the past four months I've only put out about 10,000 total words of fanfic (three small one-shots and a chapter in my HiE fic). But I'm trying to focus more on writing this month, and have dropped my video game time to next-to-nothing, so we'll see if I manage to produce anything.

5680392 You better. :trollestia:

~Crystalline Electrostatic~

5680392 Still waiting for more of this...

~Crystalline Electrostatic~
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I dislike the mention of heat, but otherwise, this was good. You're surprisingly adept at this. :) Got any more stories about Hazelnut?

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I've had one in the works for ages, but spend much more of my writing energy on canon characters or original fiction right now.

Honestly, I'm waiting for a valid excuse for why there isn't a sequal to this. I dig that Twilight's first marefriend was a pegasus (and not part of the Mane 6).

But now I want to know what happened. Even if she's moved on to somepony else, Hazlenut and Twilight will always have that time they spent together. Kinkyness aside.

Or even better, she comes to Ponyville, and she and Twilight rekindle what they once had.

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