Time it took to complete the story: 34 minutes (from 12:58 pm to 13:32 pm, Greenwich Mean Time, Gmt)
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Story Description:The biggest loss of her life hit her the hardest, as Rainbow Dash loses her father, she comes to realise that nothing in her life is certain anymore.
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4734250 Hey, I'm just following a prompt, I couldn't make her be all like "Yes, now that my father is gone, I can be FREE!", she's the element of loyalty.
And if it helps you, just think that she will find solace in the arms of her friends, and will learn, with all this, to be a better mother slash sister to scoots. It'll make her value all the ponies she helds dear to her heart, a little bit more.
This hit a little too close to home for me.
My grandfather's in the hospital right now, he's not doing too well and my mom loves him with all her heart...
4737919 I am so, so sorry for all the ansiety and worries you must be going through right now, and this dumb story did not help.
You know what I usually do to cheer me up? I listen to the "Smile song" on a loop. If you're interested in my stories, I'd suggest you stick to the romantic ones. Like "those glasses" (feather x twist), candy to the chicken (scoots x twist) and such...Yeah , cute fillies and colts falling for one another, always cheers me up.
I hope everything turns out okay for you
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Thanks man. I'm not worried though. He's 82, beaten cancer twice, and has raised a wonderful (If slightly annoying.) family. He'll pull through hopefully. :)
Hey, this was pretty good.
I would have liked it to be longer, and expand Dash's feelings and thoughts a bit more , but I guess there's only so much that can be done in thirty or so minutes.
You did a good job with the prompt.
Nice one!