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Beautifully Horrific Poetry

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KaBar42

KaBar42 #1 · Jul 22nd, 2014 · 6 · 1 · Chapter 1: A few years later ·

This wasn't very well written.

If you give me a few hours, I'll do a proper review of the fic. One important thing to note is that most chapters should be at least one thousand words or above.

Treble_Heart

Treble_Heart #2 · Jul 22nd, 2014 · · · Chapter 1: A few years later ·

Thank you for your comments. This is my first story and I'm not all that good at it. I hope you enjoyed it otherwise. I'll be starting revisions here soon

GrayHope