A strange and dangerous monster attacked Ponyville. Some ponies are wounded so Celestia decided to kill a monster. Witnesses said "It looks like a wolf. But not a normal wolf. This one is the biggest wolf that we've ever seen". Twillight, and her friends, went into a forest with task to kill the monster. During a travel they met a trop of wild wolves from a North. Their leader was a... pony called "Black Wolf- at your service".
Coverart by a the best from the best ones - Yakovlev-vad :D
Big thanks to a good editor and even better friend - pokefreak13 :D
Chapters (1)
So... wait. humans exist in this universe? Where is the Human tag then?
It's a very interesting concept not too many people make authentic and original stories like this. So have a fav and a like keep up the good work
4756045 They will be :> But not here. It is just a short admission :>
4756064 Thanks :D
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They will be in this story?
4756092 This story is ended but I'll wrote an another one called "Escape to the North". People will be on a North living with ponies.
What other Ponyville is there?
4756180 Corrected :)
Good original story. I just realized you used the word "a "instead of "the" a lot.
4756180 the a in between attacked and ponyville
5688626 Excuse me?
Please don't take this the wrong way... But this story isn't very good. Some sentences are incomplete, some make no scene, like
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, the paragraph structure is all wonky, and you should never use the word I in a narration unless you're using first person narrative. Finally Celestia and the mane six are OOC, they'd never want to kill anything, no matter how dangerous it is. I won't dislike it or anything, and it is by no means one of the worst things that I've ever read, but it's just not very good. (Don't feel bad. I'm sure that if you get help next time things will get/go better next time.) And what do you mean by "(Corrections needed)"?
5714375 It's very early version. I can say it's the first thing what I've written in English so I know that I have a lot of mistakes here.
"Corrections needed"
I added it into tittle for remind me to correct this story. I'm still learning writting in English, but when I was creating this story, I could make only the simplest sentences. Now, I know more and when I will get some freetime I'll improve this story. Anyway, thank you for your comment :)
I'm not mad, because I can see how bad is this part :).