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So far not bad. A good read most definitely! :twilightsmile:

The ponies and the nords have met. NEXT CHAPTER NOW!

I wasn't expecting there to be another chapter today...

BUT I AM SO HAPPY RIGHT NOW!
:twilightsmile::rainbowkiss::ajsmug::yay::pinkiehappy::raritywink:

4745683 I might have another one up in a few hours. This story has been sitting in my computer for awhile now. I'm just now getting around to polishing it up and posting it. Glad you like it.

4745721 Your welcome.
And even though dozens of people aren't reading the story yet it doesn't mean that its bad, the readers and fans will find this story eventually and soon hopefully (cos they're missing some good reading material) but for now I hope our appreciation is enough. Well done. :twilightsmile:

4745721 Add this to groups. Helps a long ways in getting your fic seen by as many people as it can.

Hmmmm. One of my favorite video game series crossing over into one of my favorite TV shows? I must read this! :moustache:

4818761 Tacitus is that you! :raritystarry: Dude I love your story! Anyway as for you dyingenglish 21 views, 12 likes and counting. Not the fastest rate but people are definitely starting to notice your story now. :twilightsmile:

4820237 Thanks. Glad you enjoy it :twilightsmile: Your avatar is awesome BTW :moustache:

An arrow to the knee joke...it had to be done.

Can't wait to see their reaction to Spike. Also... CHEESE!!!!!

Being a massive fan of Skyrim, I can't wait to check this out! :pinkiehappy:

Put spaces in between the paragraphs please. Then I'll be happy to read this.

Holy hell! Waly's more oblivious to his surroundings than me.:pinkiegasp:

Please write MOOOOOORE! If that's okay with you :fluttershysad:

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I like the direction of this story. Seriousness yet enough humor. Keep up the good work DyingEnglish!!

hehehehe gotta love Sheogorath :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia: that damn madman always talking in fuckin riddles:pinkiecrazy:

more please, I-if that's alright with you that is:fluttershysad:

Maybe I should have posted this earlier, but whatever, I'm posting it now. This story is REALLY well-written and the story is awesome...PLEASE WRITE MORE! :applejackconfused:
Sorry...got a little carried away.:twilightblush: But seriously, this is a really good story and I'm excited for more.

And the adventure continues! I missed this story. :pinkiehappy:

Another chapter so soon? Woo-hoo! :yay:

Ok I question how he got the Heart of Lorkan. As far as I know it was banished from Nirn at the end of Morrowind. Which incidentally wasn't a good thing since it meant Nirn lost its divinity and Red Mountain was deactivated. If I have my lore right, Red Mountain was one of the Towers that held Mundus together or something. I only know if all of the Towers were shut off, it'd be very very bad. And several of them are by the time of ESV: Skyrim.

Ok so that's how he got the Heart. Makes sense I guess. :applejackunsure:

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I hate how fanfics portray Sheogorath as an insane gibbering fool obsessed with cheese. He's insane certainly, but he's not a fool. If anything he's more like The Doctor crossed with Q.

He loves us in all our imperfection (like the Doctor) and frequently throws tests at us designed to get us to think outside the box (like Q) or drive us insane. Mostly both at the same time.

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I don't know. That prophecy has me concerned. Does it foretell a battle between the Sun and Moon against the Golden King that they lose? Or are they fighting alongside the Golden King and fall before he does? Or is it something more benign like they slip on a banana peel?

Bloody prophecies are always so fucking vague.

Most of the refugees are going to be Nords, of course, but Dunmer and Khajiit will be close seconds from the Grey Quarter and the Khajiit caravans. Luna's going to be in for a surprise when she has several dozen cat creatures worshiping her!

I wonder how the presence of a single moon will affect Khajiit births.

Argonians will likely die out. If I recall correctly they require their Hist Trees for reproduction. Maybe one of them thought to bring seeds or a sapling.

I fear what their reaction to Spike will be, or the other Dragons of Equus. Are the dragons of Equus related to Nirn Dragons?

Nirn Dragons do not reproduce, they simply are. While Spike was hatched from an egg.

Perhaps the Dragons of Equus were once Nirn Dragons banished after the First Dragon War, lost their connection to Akatosh, forgot how to use the Thu'um, and lost their immortality which would force them to adopt sexual reproduction to continue their species.

And then they mellowed out after they all finally got laid.

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Yes very good! Basically, these towers existed all over Nirn. Red Mountain, High Hrothgar, the Adamantine Tower, White Gold Tower, and even Numidium (walk brass the dwemer golem) were just a few of the towers that kept Mundus from colliding with Oblivion (or something like that). I think each province of Tamriel had a tower. It was actually the Aldmeri Dominion's end game to pull a Code Lyoko and deactivate these towers along with killing off all of humanity. They being under the impression that doing so would restore their divinity. Just when you thought the pseudo-Nazi Elves couldn't get much worse.

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Damn Thalmor.

Wonder what they'd think of Earth. A world with 7+ billion humans. I can almost hear them rage-shitting bricks right now.

Funny thing about the Thalmor. Their god Auri-El left them the instructions on how to restore their divinity and they fucking lost them.

Wonder how the Thalmor are handling the situation back on Nirn. All their plans and plots don't amount to shit when facing Alduin's wrath I suppose.

I want to see them piss themselves as Alduin devours their souls.

It was all ogre now.

Woo-Hoo, new chapter!

...still fearful of what their reaction to Spike is going to be.

Good to hear their safe in Equestria! Sadly however, I'm sure there will be some ponies who will wish to exploit this.

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Yeah you can see it coming all the way from the friggen Oort Cloud.

:twilightsmile: Bastian, this is my number one assistant, Spike.
:moustache: Nice to meet you.
:Bastian: DRAGON!!!

Hopefully someone in this story isn't holding the Idiot Ball and will calm the situation.

Like by pointing out that Spike is a "baby" dragon, and how that should be impossible because dragons don't breed.

Or actually ask Spike "Hey do you eat human souls?"
:spike: What?! No I eat gems.
"Soul Gems?"
:spike: No. I eat rubies, sapphires, diamonds, etc.

Or have Celestia ask Bastian to gather all of the able-bodied Blades for a meeting and explain that they are free to live here in peace, but they're going to have to get along with the dragons.

She knows the Blades are dragon slayers and have a deep-seeded hatred for dragons which is understandable considering what happened to their home world. Not nipping potential conflict with them in the bud would be the epitome of stupidity.

Of course even if some Blades agree to give Equestria's dragons a chance, there will probably be one who refuses to bury old grudges and lead a few others to slaughter any dragon they can find.

...Perhaps this is the prophecy. The Golden King is a rouge Blade who starts a war with the dragons of Equestria, and it's up to a team-up between the ponies, Bastian, and a few others to stop him.

Or maybe the Golden King is a dragon who takes offense to Celestia harboring dragon slayers, and starts a war against the ponies?

That actually makes sense. Dragons like to hoard gold, so the ruler of the dragons would likely be called The Golden King.

Candy! She sounds cute and i hope she is going to join the CMC if she doesnt have one. '

That was cute, but I have to call shenanigans on the mind reading thing.

Using magic to read Twilight's mind and seeing her memories of Spike's birth and raising him just doesn't make any sense at all. As far as I know, there is no canon spell in the Elder Scrolls that can do that.

It was also an invasion of privacy.

6261787 Plus you would think the most powerful mage on the entire continent would be able to realize someone was digging around in her head with magic. But I'm so happy this isn't dead almost 80% of the stuff I read is dead...

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Ugh don't. Just don't. I'm following 37 fanfics on Fanfiction.net. Most haven't updated in weeks.

Then again I have no business complaining. I'm trying to write an Elder Scrolls crossover fanfic of my own, but I've only got two chapters mostly done and I've been stuck on the third since May. Ah well I figured I'd never finish it anyway which is why I haven't submitted anything.

6261787 I am taking some liberties with how Nirn magic works in the story, sorry if it turns you off a bit :pinkiesad2: While telepathy, mind reading, etc hasn't been addressed in the ES series (save for Morrowind where Telepaths are referenced at character creation. Although if such spells did exist in game I don't know how they would function) I don't think that is to say it doesn't exist at all. I love skyrim but I've always thought the magic system wasn't that great which sucks because I really like how magic has been portrayed in the series up to that point. Also, when the time comes for Bastian and Twilight to talk magic I want the conversation to be more interesting than

Bastian: Yeah we have magic. There's flame thrower, then small fireball, big fire ball and really big fire ball.

Twilight: That- That's it?

Bastian: Y-yeah... Well, there's lightning bolt... lightning bolt and uh... lightning bolt...

:moustache: Wow... that's cool /s

(Throws fireball)

:moustache: bitchimadragon!

:facehoof:

But anyway most of the characters are going to be magic users so I'm just trying to liven things up a bit. Sorry if it doesn't sit to well with you. :twilightsheepish:
In regards to Bas reading her mind and her not picking up on it, bear in mind that this is season 1 twilight and she was under duress at the time and Bas has been doing this for a long time. As far as it being an invasion of privacy, in the chapters to come you'll find that Bastian doesn't quite fall within the "Lawful Good" steps of the alignment chart.
I hope that even with these changes you guys can still enjoy my story.

Princejonathan if you're writing a mlp/elderscrolls fic I'd be happy to help if you'd like. Trust me, I know all about starting something and not finishing it :derpyderp1:

“Yeah. Just sucks that his will was to destroy all creation.” Shahk said. “But we gave’em hell huh?!”

Actually isn't that his job? I mean he's the World-Eater. It's what he's suppose to do. It's what his dad, Akatosh, created him to do. Can't really call a bloke evil when he's just doing his job.

I thought what had happened was back in the Late Merethic Era (I think that's when the First Dragon War happened) he abandoned his purpose of ending Mundus in order to rule it like a Tyrant God Emperor or something.

Then the people revolted and banished him several millennia into the future.

6284510 I thought Akatosh had boobolies... maybe that was just a porn comic or twelve. welp time to waste the last week of summer replaying Skyrim.

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Well as an Et'Ada, Akatosh is actually genderless I think. He can have boobs if he wants to, or not. I mean who are we to argue.

If a god wakes up in the morning and goes "hmm I think I'll go with a vagina today" like he's picking out a tie, are you really going to tell him no?

Funny thing though, Alduin is not an Et'Ada as far as I know, so I am not really clear on his relationship with Akatosh. But he addresses himself as the First-Born of Akatosh. Make of that what you will.

Can't help but feel like The Equestran Scrolls would've been better.

You know, Elder, Equestria.

Just my two cents.

When I first heard of Wally, I thought he was gonna be the family equivalent of Waldo.

If Savos Aren and Mirabelle stayed, what happened to the other holds?

More plz this is jest so good oh and by the way I need to sleep now it is 4:25AM me go to sleep now moopaloopaloop

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