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Rinnaul
I do nothing of merit. On occasion, I give the impression of being creative, but this is a deception. I am merely derivative in clever ways.
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I really loved the inner turmoil and pent up rage being illustrated with words in all the right places good job
That was so dark and creepy in a way. Awesome fic!
Ahhh, Pinkamena. The mad mare that got me hooked on writing fimfic in the first place. Will you ever grow stale?
Nope. Not if stories like this keep popping up. A short, sharp shock. Nice character analysis you have going here.
I'm faving it.
Jesus...
Holy shit...
I mean... the moment I realized what was going on... wow... fucking hell...
It's been too long since I've had a chance to read something as dark and disturbing as this fic was. Way too long. In fact, I can't even remember the last one that hit me as fucking hard as the realization in this one did (pardon me for all the cussing, I know it's not exactly "professional" behavior, but I just can't help myself). In retrospect, it's not like it would have been difficult to figure it out after about three lines or so, but I must admit that I didn't have much enthusiasm going into this read, since at first I thought "great... yet another 'Pinkamena' story..."
How foolish of me...
Anyway, a lot of other "dark" stories try to get away with "murdering the cute, innocent, and unsuspecting one and thus take a cheap shot at being "disturbing," so in that sense, and even with the Mirror Pool idea, it's not the most original thing ever. The genius of this story is that it builds on an already questionable premise (i.e "could Twilight's solution to the 'too many Pinkies' problem be considered mass murder?"), then takes it only one step further. It doesn't take a giant leap right from the start by coming up with something ridiculous like "the CMC came to her place every Wednesday to work on their 'skin ponies alive' cutie marks..."
Once we get the idea, this story wraps itself up nicely. It doesn't outstay its welcome, it keeps things nice and subtle (plot-wise), so we can only guess where this all began, not to mention where it will end, and the writing represents very well just what Pinkie is going through. And it's as bleak as it gets, which is the kind of stuff that I adore.
Phenomenal work. Have a like and fave!
Damn... the "fun scene" that starts halfway through is still haunting me...
Is it bad that I laughed inside a little...
This story is sick and disgusting and makes my insides squirm at its horrificness. And god help me I Love It.
Ahhhhhhhhhh!
This is written incredibly, I'm all squirmy and scared now!
Short, clever, to the point. Have a ribbon:
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Magnificent
A nice, well-written glimpse into a madness-rattled mind.
It just makes me think if Pinkie is really thinking about this. Good job.
Great story, flawlessly written, I'm hooked.
It's also a perfect look into a depressed and twisted mind.Not that I know anything about it but, neither a depressed nor sane mind ponders on something for too long.
I Love It!
Although I'm kinda worried for the author this seems a little to realistic.
~A Friendly Bat Pony
This is fantastic do you mind if I make a Reading of this?
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I'm never opposed to readings, or any other derivative of my own fanfiction, so feel free! Go ahead and share it in here when you do.
Just to preface:
-I'm new to this whole "fic reading thing" so this is not some vet
-My Style is very similar to Dr. Wolf's if you have ever seen/listened him
I can only describe this in one word: YEAH!!
I love how you twist the cliche of "Pinkamena is a serial killer" into Pinkie is disturbed and worried that her friends only see a flanderised version of her as their real friend and lets out this rage on mirror clones as a form of self harm
It's very cool
This dark tale is the Featured Story in October for Twilight's Library