Wait, wasn't he like in some Human porn that made its way to Equestria? Or was it photo shop Internet fan art? Either way I'd say him doing porn was fairly accurate.
5393084 ehhh, close enough. Unless Jacob has a doppelganger out there random human fan art done in his likeness without his knowledge or consent, is still porn. So technically what he said is true even if he doesn't know it.
LOL, really good chapter BTW I love how it's all RomCom threes company up until the point it goes cheesy 70s porno. Only way it could have been cheesier is if while they bickered he came out of the bath all naked and said "Now now ladies, sharing is careing. And GOOD friends should always share." But this chapter had way more class to it. Execelnt work!
5393123 I considered doing something like that but I ended up keeping what I had. Anyway what I'm going for is something kinda cheeky and funny but with heart in it too. Lyra and Bon-Bon aren't two bland horny girls, they're complex individuals with backgrounds and interests, etc. One of those interests being Jacob however. Oh and thank you!
5393128 Yes, kinda love how Bon Bon is a total slut (err very direct about her desires) and Lyra is the coy one who both envies and lothes her directness. I was kind of hoping the monogamy thing would be draw out into more drama but for the sake of keeping it lighthearted I can't fault anything you've done this chapter.
5393140 I could but I like to vary my stories. For example, my amnesia story is darker and gritty. Sombra's Redemption is dark but with a ray of hope in the theme. Playing With Fire or The Sound of a Heartbeat are gonna be going a little more in that direction though. You will see more character though, I mean yes Bon-Bon is more or less blunt as a brick but she's not just hormones given mobility. Like Jacob, you'll have to get to know em a little.
I'm really loving the dynamic between Lyra and Bon Bon "competing" for Jacob, whereas Lyra is trying to be really subtle, while Bon Bon is being borderline blatant. This is a really fun story so far, keep doing what you're doing. Also, I'm up for proof-reading this story.
5395393 I'm glad! And don't worry, it'll only get more interesting as more characters come into play, some you might recognize a little if you read my other stories. And if you wanna help simply point out any errors you see or quirks or holes in the plot line and comment them or message me. (I like getting mail in general, but not just spammed)
5396176 Sounds cool. Even though I'll probably just stick to helping you fix any grammar mistakes you may have looked over. But who knows, maybe I'll find a plot hole or two.
5396629 Alrighty then, oh and just a reminder, keep an eye out for Vinyl and Octavia poking up later in the story. You probably won't see them for a bit but as the story really gets its footing you'll start to see characters from The Sound of a Heartbeat and Playing With Fire.
Really loving the dynamic of Bon Bon and Lyra in this one, and I have been laughing my ass off at there shenanigans. But now it looks like Jacob knows what they where up too, so I'm excited to see what happens next. I wasn't expecting him to find out so soon, but That's okay. lol
Hope all is well with you, and I shall be waiting for more updates and stories for ya.
5398194 Yep, he's not just some boring awkward white dude after all, and better yet. He knows how to play the game. 5407874 Yeah, I mean it's awfully convenient how it's mostly young, horny adult men and women coming to Equestria too, almost as if Celestia had a dirty plan in mind. Whoops, spoilers...
5471015 Oh yes, I was mostly waiting to see which story people nagged at wanting to see updated first. Gives me an idea of what everyone actually wants to read. I'll update this then and I know it's not as popular but I want to update Sombra's Redemption as well. I love working on that one. It's like the baby of the family (despite being the oldest, now riddle me that one.)
5479817 Haha awesome, and I'll try to update this more frequently but I try to take care of all my stories. Unless I specifically say so I'll never just stop a story.
5479830 ohh so glad to know that. I only checked because i saw your new story on my clopfic feed (burning desire was it?) and was curious why your name was so familliar... so i checked you page and it turned out i've already read some of your stories including this one (though you can say this is my favorite along with lyra's little secret). Anyway, more power to you buddy
5479846 Lol, happens to me all the time. And yeah, Lyra's Dirty Little Secret was more of something I kinda started on a spur of the moment, thought about it after seeing that pic I think actually and the thought "meanwhile in an alternate universe, there has to be ponies clopping to pictures of you. If you wanna see that actually addressed in a story you should read The Sound of A Heartbeat. I kinda had fun with that and chipped away at the 4th wall just a little. :p
5479896 I seem to have a lot of those and I'm not even topless yet! (btw I'm getting like a crazy amount of new stalkers and favorites lately, idk i think maybe some related stories are getting featured and people are finding mine from there)
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND your bucking busted. Either way I would still love to go to Equestria! It would be a dream come true!(no matter how gay it sounds)
Anywho... Good job on the story dood! Keep it up man!
5727620 Actually someone to kind of bounce ideas off of could help a little. I have a sea of ideas and if I knew only how to write them all out I could probably triple how much writing I have in only a few weeks.
Wait, wasn't he like in some Human porn that made its way to Equestria? Or was it photo shop Internet fan art? Either way I'd say him doing porn was fairly accurate.
5393080 Ah but there's the thing, it could be coincidence...who knows...
5393084
ehhh, close enough. Unless Jacob has a doppelganger out there random human fan art done in his likeness without his knowledge or consent, is still porn. So technically what he said is true even if he doesn't know it.
5393095 Lol I suppose it would be.
That cliff hanger though
LOL, really good chapter BTW I love how it's all RomCom threes company up until the point it goes cheesy 70s porno. Only way it could have been cheesier is if while they bickered he came out of the bath all naked and said "Now now ladies, sharing is careing. And GOOD friends should always share."
But this chapter had way more class to it. Execelnt work!
5393123 I considered doing something like that but I ended up keeping what I had. Anyway what I'm going for is something kinda cheeky and funny but with heart in it too. Lyra and Bon-Bon aren't two bland horny girls, they're complex individuals with backgrounds and interests, etc. One of those interests being Jacob however. Oh and thank you!
5393128
Yes, kinda love how Bon Bon is a total slut (err very direct about her desires) and Lyra is the coy one who both envies and lothes her directness. I was kind of hoping the monogamy thing would be draw out into more drama but for the sake of keeping it lighthearted I can't fault anything you've done this chapter.
5393140 I could but I like to vary my stories. For example, my amnesia story is darker and gritty. Sombra's Redemption is dark but with a ray of hope in the theme. Playing With Fire or The Sound of a Heartbeat are gonna be going a little more in that direction though. You will see more character though, I mean yes Bon-Bon is more or less blunt as a brick but she's not just hormones given mobility. Like Jacob, you'll have to get to know em a little.
Just a heads up, "Oh must of just missed her." should be "Oh, must 'have' just missed her."
That got me weak as fuck. Dude knows how to play the game!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Gay? if the story became true. im out!
5393459 Oh yeah, just wait and see. He's no fool.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
I'm really loving the dynamic between Lyra and Bon Bon "competing" for Jacob, whereas Lyra is trying to be really subtle, while Bon Bon is being borderline blatant. This is a really fun story so far, keep doing what you're doing. Also, I'm up for proof-reading this story.
5395393 I'm glad! And don't worry, it'll only get more interesting as more characters come into play, some you might recognize a little if you read my other stories. And if you wanna help simply point out any errors you see or quirks or holes in the plot line and comment them or message me. (I like getting mail in general, but not just spammed)
5396176 Sounds cool. Even though I'll probably just stick to helping you fix any grammar mistakes you may have looked over. But who knows, maybe I'll find a plot hole or two.
5396629 Alrighty then, oh and just a reminder, keep an eye out for Vinyl and Octavia poking up later in the story. You probably won't see them for a bit but as the story really gets its footing you'll start to see characters from The Sound of a Heartbeat and Playing With Fire.
Bwahahaha!![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
This is awesome! Thank you for updating this!
5397865 You're welcome! Man I delayed long enough didn't I?
5398110![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
A little... But I forgive ya
Really loving the dynamic of Bon Bon and Lyra in this one, and I have been laughing my ass off at there shenanigans. But now it looks like Jacob knows what they where up too, so I'm excited to see what happens next.
I wasn't expecting him to find out so soon, but That's okay. lol
Hope all is well with you, and I shall be waiting for more updates and stories for ya.![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
5398194 Yep, he's not just some boring awkward white dude after all, and better yet. He knows how to play the game.![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
5407874 Yeah, I mean it's awfully convenient how it's mostly young, horny adult men and women coming to Equestria too, almost as if Celestia had a dirty plan in mind. Whoops, spoilers...
Plans on continuing anytime soon?![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
5471015 Oh yes, I was mostly waiting to see which story people nagged at wanting to see updated first. Gives me an idea of what everyone actually wants to read. I'll update this then and I know it's not as popular but I want to update Sombra's Redemption as well. I love working on that one. It's like the baby of the family (despite being the oldest, now riddle me that one.)
5472012 Well i dunno about everyone else but I think he should have some weird fetish just for laughs
It'd be all like
"Hooves." "What?" "Hooves, I have a thing for hooves."
*EDIT* Not that foot/hoof fetish is weird but fetishes in general are weird. just personal opinion![:twilightblush:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightblush.png)
5474210 You forgot to add fun. Don't worry I have some interesting plans for Jacob.![:raritywink:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritywink.png)
5474808 Can't wait!![:rainbowkiss:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowkiss.png)
Tssk.. how bad of me not to check on this funny story. Glad to know it updated![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
5479817 Haha awesome, and I'll try to update this more frequently but I try to take care of all my stories. Unless I specifically say so I'll never just stop a story.
5479830 ohh so glad to know that. I only checked because i saw your new story on my clopfic feed (burning desire was it?) and was curious why your name was so familliar... so i checked you page and it turned out i've already read some of your stories including this one (though you can say this is my favorite along with lyra's little secret). Anyway, more power to you buddy![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
5479846 Lol, happens to me all the time. And yeah, Lyra's Dirty Little Secret was more of something I kinda started on a spur of the moment, thought about it after seeing that pic I think actually and the thought "meanwhile in an alternate universe, there has to be ponies clopping to pictures of you. If you wanna see that actually addressed in a story you should read The Sound of A Heartbeat. I kinda had fun with that and chipped away at the 4th wall just a little. :p
5479891 lol, now because of that you have a new stalker. Hahaha![:trollestia:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/trollestia.png)
5479896 I seem to have a lot of those and I'm not even topless yet! (btw I'm getting like a crazy amount of new stalkers and favorites lately, idk i think maybe some related stories are getting featured and people are finding mine from there)
5727400 Why's that?
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAND your bucking busted. Either way I would still love to go to Equestria! It would be a dream come true!(no matter how gay it sounds)![:raritystarry:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/raritystarry.png)
![:pinkiesmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiesmile.png)
![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)
Anywho... Good job on the story dood! Keep it up man!![:twilightsmile:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/twilightsmile.png)
5727454 Thanks! Glad ya like. I'll try to include an update for this one in the mass update I have planned this weekend.
5727498 sweet! I'll keep my eye out for notifications!![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
.
.
If you need anything from me by chance just pm me and I'll respond ASAP!
I like helping the fimfiction fandom!
5727620 Actually someone to kind of bounce ideas off of could help a little. I have a sea of ideas and if I knew only how to write them all out I could probably triple how much writing I have in only a few weeks.
5727668 I'd be glad to help!
I'm always looking for ways to help out the fimfiction fandom! POWAH TO DA PEEPAL 'N STUFF!
. . .
Sorry...![:rainbowlaugh:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/rainbowlaugh.png)
5730288 Lol it's alright, and who knows with any luck maybe I could get Senpai to notice me! (Like Kaidan, Anonymous Pegasus, etc)
Hahahahaa! So much yes! 8D I love how this is going.
Awesome job dude once again!
Keep it up!
5766239 Thanks! I'll try to update it soon. Chapter's already half done.
5766377
Yesh! 8D Cant wait to read, good luck with the rest of it :D
5766526 Thanks, I'll be sure to put it out when it's ready.
5766585
Awesome sauce 8D
*peeks around*
Nothing yet? ok then.
*returns to stasis sleep*
5814497 I'll do my best not to go rampant in the mean time.
(Halo reference anyone?)
5814542 was just checking for updates for my faved stories
(and yes.. you nailed it)
5814550 Half-way through it. I'd rather go for a longer chapter after the short past few. At least like 3k words or more preferably.
5840266 Oh there very well might be...![:ajsmug:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/ajsmug.png)