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Death, the eldest of the Four Horsemen of the Apocalypse, has been given a new chance at life as a reward from the Creator Himself for all the good he's done in life, but the Pale Rider is in for quite a surprise as where, and what, he wakes up as.
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I'm liking this story so far but is this the four horsemen from darksiders or something else?
4712995 Darksiders
Uh sry but you spelled the chapter wrong, it's "Prolouge" not "Prologe". But i'm liking the story so far :)
Hmm...a crossover from Darksiders? Interesting....
10/10 it's okay -ign
Cool crossover with Darksiders 2.
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Umm, I think it's "Prologue", not "Prolouge".
SO SHORT!MAKE LONGER!
4713598 your wish is my command
4713032 the auto correct didn't show me so I don't know
Gasp darksiders 2 crossover ohhh the chils I love it the chills never lie
luna asked : "Why d-doesn't a-anypony love m-my night?"
does this mean she is going to be nightmare moon again ?
dahhh to short right now but it fitt perfectly in the time i had left right now.
4715051 actually, if you remember correctly The Creator told Death that He was going to send him to before Luna's fall from Grace, So this is over 1,000 years ago
4715480 thx
Yis. Yis, this pleases me
Everypony, I'd like you to meet my little brother,4717550
4714173 YUSH
Need more
Not bad so far.
Luna... I this is why you where sent to the moon... You woke her up...
Not bad, i have thought it maybe take him a bit to like her, but to be true i don´t really know his whole personallity. But i think i know from which game this is, could you tell me the name?, then i can look if i really know it.
Actually till know i think i can actually really like it.
Moar!!!!! Pls!!!
Well that was different to I thought would happen... Tia didn't hit her or something.... Oh well keep up the good work :D
There ponies they don't wear pants.
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The wake up call
It has put more fear in the hearts of men then darkness and the thing that dwell within
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Wait for him to notice that
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I bet you thought I put something there
4739172 4739251 It's a reference
4740114 A pretty bad one at that don't you think?
Ok good justmtry and take ur time from now on please
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i'm sure it did
4725071 If i am to guess correctly, i would assume darksiders 2
Just a heads up, punctuation marks can change the meaning of an entire sentence. For instance, in the author's note, putting a comma between Queen and Death would make it little less confusing one what you are trying to say.
i almost sure that i really like your story enough for a favourite.
Only to be sure, please not make a story like i see often enough. I mean it is ok if there is sex and such but i doesn´t need something like Rainbow Dash havin sex every chapter, maybe three time in a row in one chapter and over and over agains till it looks like it is only used to fill the chapters. I would like more cute moments, they seems to be rare here. Most storys the lovers just having sex and well not share a nice moment like just cuddling. I saw in another story that this works as well according to the people who vote up for the story.
4755543 Thanks! And don't worry about the sex thing, there ain't gonna be Clop, closest thing to it will lead to Death changing the roles in history forever
4757134 well thanks, it ease my mind a bit, i really don´t have much against it but it you can understand it....it doesn´t looked that good if the sex part is overused, i really don´t like them to have sex every chapter. I mean if you want to read a clopfic then you look for it right? And if you look for a nice interessting story you don´t want it to be well suddenly a clopfic too or something similar.
If you want it later Clop is ok, but maybe make it a bit like it means a lot for them and or at least put a few cutes moments in there, if they can have sex why shouldn´t they be interessted in some time....well just cuddling or something like that.
PS: I don´t read it or don´t saw i when you had written that his horse (forgot the name) was unconscious because of the Canterlot Voice.
Good start. Your creativity in this is most impressive, Please continue.
Death vs Sombra who will win? LOL
Before I read...... what happened to chapter 2?
4817437 Death hands (or is it hoofs now?) down
4817718 Sorry, that was a chapter numbering accident, thanks for pointing it out
Sombra's going to get his flank kicked so hard he won't be able to sit down for 1000 years when he fights Death.
4817908 No problem had fun pointing it out to also I still have yet to start reading... maybe later sometime not sure when though, maybe soon.
Has caught interest but not full attention.
you have no idea how much I waited for this chapter
4828152 I'd imagine quite a bit
MOARMOARMOARMOARMOAR!!!!!!
4852963 Okay, okay, I'm trying my best, I still need to think of what Death's misadventures between chapter 3 and Luna heading to the Crystal Empire. I've been thinking about The Doctor making a cameo appearance with Derpy, Roseluck, or Octavia
Ha, Arceus got tail.
Yes cause telling the incarnate/avatar of death that he can't kill something would totally work lol
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