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Comedy tag warranted.

strange but still funny. although the baby wouldn't turn out exactly like her. children are a complete random mix of genetics from both parents. even with just one parent's genetics she would be a completely different set of genetics, they'd be rearranged in a different order from her mother when created. but meh, it IS magic....blegh

5983674 Actually in many species that reproduce asexually (and we're not just talking about single-celled organisms - even species as complex as sharks can reproduce asexually!) the daughter is a clone of the mother.

comedy sequel? maybe with Shining's reaction to his new niece?

also continue?

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Don't judge me! :raritydespair::raritycry:

5983725 Night Light and Twilight Velvet thought that Shining Armor and Cadance would be the ones to make them grandparents. They didn't expect Twilight Sparkle to get there first.

Shining: "I become captain of the royal guards, and you become Celestia's personal protégé. I become prince consort, and you become a princess. I get Cadance pregnant, and you give birth. Why do you always have to upstage me, Twilight?"

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no sudden overprotective brother mode? like finding out who he thinks might have knocked her up?

Oh this hits me right in all the right fetishes. Good erotic pony labor/birth is so hard to find.

More please?

...this is every bit the train wreck I was expecting.
The real question is, what about Baby Celestia? Can't help but wonder if they just timeshare the whole princess thing while the other goes on vacation. Either that or Celestia ate her.

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Dyed her coat pink, raised her like a hippie. Hi, my name's Cadence, are you a Princess too?

The 'sex' was pretty weird. Now i'm wondering if it would apply to a real life scenario. I'm sure it's not, but the thought is still there

Ah, the miracle of childbirth :twilightsmile: ... and the pains joys related to it :twilightoops:
At least this will teach Twilight a lesson to not dabble in forbidden magics or at least read their instructions thoroughly, right? Oh who am I kidding :facehoof::rainbowlaugh:

Anyway, my unusual kinks were satisfied, and aside a few typos you've delivered splendidly :yay:

There should be a sequel, it doesn't even have to have clop, i jus wanna see the fallout of this.

So... what would happen if Shining Armor cast this spell?

5984550 he'd become a mare and then give birth then turn back into a stallion.

5985581 You will be my hero. Maybe something focusing on the early labor before the popping?

Now I want to read a story where ponies reproduce like aphids.

5985763 Don't do this here. This isn't the time or place for this.

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Well, you did drop by and imply the kinks I like were weird. :fluttershyouch:

My poor self esteem! :fluttershbad:

I actually know what that image your cover is is from.
This makes me eager to read this.
~TOOWC

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5985845 ^this

Sorry, Mothy; if you're a shitposting asshole, I'll do it right back to you. :^)

I forgot that you wrote this sort of thing. Guess I never noticed.

5985845 I'm sorry, I thought you'd understand my comment was meant entirely tongue-in-cheek. If I offended you, I apologize. That was never my intention.

5985853 Except I wasn't shit-posting. Smiles is a friend, I was being silly. So there's no excuse or justification for what you posted. At all.

okay, while i would have rather none of the sexual stuff, a good story. Shame we won't get to see twi raising her daughter. That would be very amusing if you chose to make a sequel

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Change back? I dunno... a foal needs their mommies milk... :ajsmug:

Whoever the fuck made this abomination of a spell in the story i will rip them apart limb to limb slowly.:twilightangry2:

PART 2! PART 2! PART 2!

Though I liked it I got kinda frustrated with Spike's stupidity. He's supposed to be smart yet he understood nothing of pregnancy? He's proned to read on it since he works in her library.

this is a perfect story it is such a good slice of life I just don't know to say how good this is.

to tell the truth I can see this having a long sequel after all it would be nice to watch Twilight Twinkle grow up.

and as a side note Twilight never forgets a spell once she cast it.
in short I can see the other 5 with little ones growing up.
Fluttershy will be a exhalent mother.
Harts Fire

This is an.... interesting one.
There is a lot of potential for sequels, I mean, you have an entire pony's life, and an OC at that, at your fingertips. I would love to see her growing up and leading a life of her own.
The oral sex was a little uncalled for, but, you know, got to add a little spice to it, I guess. And now we know that we're dealing with Molestia.

P.S I actually found a lot of this quite funny. Especially RD's "oh...", that was priceless.

An explosive fic to blow minds.

Stupid Twilight. Stupid Instant Pregnancy Spell. Oh well Twilight wouldn't be Twilight if she wouldn't try out that spell. ;)

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I hope there will be a sequel to this story.

“Oh no, there’s a reason why I tried to have all these copies of the book burned with prejudice. There’s a real baby in you, I can’t dispel something that’s not made of magic.”

how is it NOT made of magic?

I admit I read that and though impregnation is kinda my thing pregnancy sex... not so much.

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You've had a spontaneous pregnancy that lead you to give birth to a horse child in the middle of your bedroom while being molested by a horse princess from a magical land too? :pinkiegasp:

5989138 Yes. It was both erotic yet terrifying.

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Kind of like saying a Cake was made by your hands but a Cake isn't made up of your hands.

Unless of course, you did make a cake with your hands as an ingredient. :fluttershyouch:

5989148 You paralel does your argument little to no good.

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Oh, okay. :applejackunsure:

Nice to see you. :rainbowkiss:

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