"I almost died. I didn't though. I got turned into a mare. It hurt a lot but I didn't die. Thats a lot better than what most people who get a shard of metal through their spine can say."
5483166 That's the only typo? Wow, I guess I really am making progress then. Unfortunately your a little late. The stories now in hiatus. I have a blog post explaining things in detail if you want to know. In the mean time I have another story you might like if you want comedy.
5909392 Oh, ha ha, I noticed the intentional errors. I know how to take a joke, I was just pointing things out to help 'em improve. I'm sorry if my comment offended anyone.
5909392 I won't. This stories dead. Plus he was right, there were a lot of mistakes and I had reached MY limit. I couldn't just keep going back and rewriting things, and the ending was terrible. Don't worry though, I working on a remake. It will have most of the same elements, but I'm going to try and give the main character more time with Luna. The ending was bad because I couldn't make up a believable reason that the two would start having a romantic interest in each other when they only interacted three times before. With the new one I hope to fix these problems.
6104032 Is all good. And if you ever need an OC i have one currently his name is blank slate and he is in the story Diaries of a Traitor by Paradoxtheory.
Yes it's slow goings, sorry 'bout that. I've learned a lot about writing since I last worked on Appetizer that I'm using while I write the last chapter, plus I have to remember all of my own story cannon so there is no continuity errors, but I am with out a doubt, one-hundred percent guaranteed, un-jokingly working on it. I promise.
I would happily re-proofread this for you, if you would let me. I ITCH to clean up this story, because it's very good (underneath all the small mistakes)
Great chapter
Keep up the good work
5444033 I think I do, but thanks all the same for pointing it out. Every little bit helps.
What about her nervous felt?! Why did she have felt and why did it have emotions, huh?? it's just cloth, dummy!!
...that's the only typo.
5483166 That's the only typo? Wow, I guess I really am making progress then. Unfortunately your a little late. The stories now in hiatus. I have a blog post explaining things in detail if you want to know. In the mean time I have another story you might like if you want comedy.
.... Continue.
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5909392 Oh, ha ha, I noticed the intentional errors. I know how to take a joke, I was just pointing things out to help 'em improve. I'm sorry if my comment offended anyone.
5909392 I won't. This stories dead. Plus he was right, there were a lot of mistakes and I had reached MY limit. I couldn't just keep going back and rewriting things, and the ending was terrible. Don't worry though, I working on a remake. It will have most of the same elements, but I'm going to try and give the main character more time with Luna. The ending was bad because I couldn't make up a believable reason that the two would start having a romantic interest in each other when they only interacted three times before. With the new one I hope to fix these problems.
And here I am pressing the non existent next button
5959936 Sorry to leave ya hanging, but there is a rework in the future I promise.
5959958 haha look forward to it
5959958 There had better, I love tf/tg stories and this is a VERY good one, it's always annoying when author's rewrite stories though..
im so glad to hear this is coming back
6084228 First story bro, should check out my other stuff. I've improved a lot.
I hope you can get some more chapters out soon :D also on a side note will you ever have need of OCs?
6102973 I'm working on the last one now, but it's taking time as I've learned a lot and want to make the end good. And no, I don't. Sorry m8.
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Is all good. And if you ever need an OC i have one currently his name is blank slate and he is in the story Diaries of a Traitor by Paradoxtheory.
Is i alive
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I think this is a compliment, so thank you!
6165557 or
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Yes it's slow goings, sorry 'bout that. I've learned a lot about writing since I last worked on Appetizer that I'm using while I write the last chapter, plus I have to remember all of my own story cannon so there is no continuity errors, but I am with out a doubt, one-hundred percent guaranteed, un-jokingly working on it. I promise.
6394422 I never really got what they meant by "Moons".
6397045 Too few examples, I like magic hooves better anyway.
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...That's the point?
I would happily re-proofread this for you, if you would let me. I ITCH to clean up this story, because it's very good (underneath all the small mistakes)