Awake

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Awake

Rainbow Dash has a horrible nightmare... or does she?

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Slayer 10321

Slayer 10321 #1 · Aug 21st, 2014 · · ·

Wow...... just wow!!!! Keep this going because it was actually good!!! Was that a nuke? Also didn't see any errors, etc. Thanks for not making this a one-shot.

punzil504

punzil504 #2 · Aug 21st, 2014 · · ·

I've had days like that.

Backslash

Backslash #3 · Aug 21st, 2014 · · ·

MY GOD that was epic

czf224

czf224 #4 · Aug 21st, 2014 · · ·

Intriguing, please continue

sparkypchu

sparkypchu #5 · Aug 25th, 2014 · 2 · ·

Hmmm...Using my Magical Story Predicting Brain Power™. This can go in one of three ways

Either:

Possibility A. A timeloop that is going to repeat the same events forever with the same Dashie.

Possibility 2. An alternate timeline of nightmares every time Dash wakes up. Each bone-chilling chapter featuring her friends dying in terrible ways until the last chapter in which she wakes up in a hospital bed and it is in fact her that is about to die.

Possibility Oranges. Dash wakes up and says "I really got to stop eating cold pizza before bed."

Whichever way I'm anticipating to see where the story progresses.

Julia

Julia #6 · Nov 10th, 2014 · · ·

4906315 if number three is true, then tonight, I've been screwed!

CodeG

CodeG #7 · Nov 16th, 2014 · · ·

Wow.......that was amazing. I can't wait to read more.

Phenrys

Phenrys #8 · Nov 16th, 2014 · · ·

Eeyup, that was a good enough beginning for a like and a fave. Keep it coming!

Sparky Brony

Sparky Brony #9 · Nov 16th, 2014 · · ·

I read this on my phone and was unable to comment for some reason. But I'm on the computer now, and I just have to say, looks like an awesome beginning for a story. Keep it up, and I really enjoyed what I've read so far!!!

silentname