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TheBlackKirin
I'm Charming Knight: I'm a Kirin. My father is a black dragon and my mother a zebracorn. I can fly and fly without my wings, breath fire and i'm good at magic. So you wanna be friends :)
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Were you drunk when you wrote this?
4642483
Nope just bored and feeling like writing something random
A good rule of thumb for writers: if you feel like doing "Something random" and your name isn't John Cleese, Terry Gilliam, Eric Idle, Terry Jones or Michael Palin... DON'T BOTHER.
interesting, dark and random as hell.
4643543
I aim to please
WHAT THE ABSOLUTE FUCK DID I JUST READ.Okay well not trying to be mean but grammar was absolute shit and also the child molesting was really not all that needed,And also no offense but it seems like it was written by a child that had a mlp r34 fetish but it was a mostly weird story,But it really could have been a actual good story and in my opinion it was just straight up fucking weird.I do hope you improve on your writing and all that shit
4644182
Thanks for the criticism and to explain the grammar i posted it as i wrote it so (2 hours to type), the grammar was gonna be crap and i wanted it to be short, random, and a bit fucked up, for a first trollfic i think this is what it would be called. No plot really, no deep story, just a random one-shot.
4644205 Yeah but thats my thoughts and opinion,also i think maybe you should go back and actually make it like an actual good story.For instance maybe have the plot similar to one of the child abuse stories,Or even like Anne that old movie and etc but if you dont want to,i would like to maybe write something about it,
And by what i mean by actually make it an i guess you could say an actual story with a plot theme and etc by taking out the child prostitution and again this is just an idea and i thought it would be nice to see an actual nice happy story,And i mean its so happy it'll be like the NoteBook.Good movie btw,but like the readers will be crying in tears of joy
And yes i understand if you are busy
Ha. Lol. This is so bad, and random.
4691976
Is it the sharknado 2 of fics,, for you right now?
Nice trollfic
You get all of the troll with none of the plot.
5005781 I actually thought i making this a plot story before i lost it and did this
The trolling real is. Me like. A .Lot, and speak I with good estate grammer as the fic did.
5121009 ik the grammar sucks. Trying to find an editor for my ongoing stories, though ill leave this one alone people love the trolly feel of it. (Msg me if u know any editors)
5121330 I think doing a quick preread before posting will fix 80% of your errors. I've done editing for friends, and it is not fun having to edit a bunch of errors that they could have fixed themselves. Before asking for editors, prove to them that you're willing to do a few self edited stories first :D just a recommendation.
5122492 got it, ill go back and edit the errors I can see
5122501 on this one, being a troll fic, I thought the errors were purposeful, but on a more serious fic, definitely pre-edit your work before posting.
5122508 oh yeah in this one I was trying to be trollin. Thanks for advice
5122767 no problem, glad to help.
Jesus, this was as bad and trolly as i remember when i wrote it
Oh my fuc*king God
4642483 Nah, just wrote it in one take. Plus didnt care for grammar/ check grammar