young adult who loves reading books and stories as much as he hopes to write some someday. Also can do grammar editing.
On a cold winter night, right on the eve of Ponyville's Winter Wrap-Up, Spike finds Princess Twilight Sparkle asleep in her study room, intent on studying even as her first Wrap-Up as a princess arrives in the morning. is she simply trying to study into the night, as is her habit, or is something else eating at her tonight?
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Nice story! I love the way you describe things when you write. Keep up the good work!
I want more please
It was really good. I hope you write more!
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Thanks.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
I'm afraid to know the details of Twilight's dream.
But yeah, that was good. It's nice to see you've finally got the courage to post this.
That would make a good introductory chapter to a longer story, if you feel like writing more.
4751797 Admittedly not the reaction I was primarily gunning for (then again, this was less a meaningful story and more something to tell myself "I can do this"), but I like it.
4757015 It depends. Do you like pie?
4760158 Not really. I'm honestly not even sure what else could go past this point beyond a 2nd chapter detailing what happens in the Wrap-Up proper.
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Just a thought. The theme of "Twilight learning how to handle being a princess" hasn't been entirely worn out by fanfic writers yet. Your story doesn't really need anything more as it is. It's just the sort of story that gets people thinking, "What could happen next?" with the Winter Wrap-up being only a sort of background of events through which Twilight's next story is showcased.
Or not.
4772288 It's not a bad idea, but there's...there's just no hooks there that I can use, and I'm not really keen on making up ones when they aren't available.
Like I said, though, it's not a bad idea. But it's not something I plan on following unless I mean to.
And then, right after I post that, my traitorous mind begins concocting semi-plausible theories that begin to fade as soon as write this, but my thoughts stand! My mind shall not object my mind!
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Oh! Ooh! I just LOVE playing with my mental blocks! My parents wouldn't give me any real ones!
4773203 Dude, you don't know how evil mental blocks are! They never play nice!