Fluttershy wakes up in a strange place, unaware of how she got there. She walks around to try and find a way out, but she finds something more darker than waking up in an unknown area.
I wrote this story before, but in human version. So, I decided to make in pony version. Plus, there was no Fluttershy.It can be found here: Nyctophobia
I rather enjoyed this story, but I could never determine what that bipedal creature was. The only creature that came to mind was a diamond dog. So what was it exactly, or is it one of those moments where you know & we're supposed to find out?
4623173 Definitely not a diamond dog. It's just a creature I formed in my mind and it all came together.
from the way he described it, it kinda sounded like the rake.
4625049 I guess they do have some similar details.
Other then needing an editor it was quite a twist, detailed and impressive, I liked it
4625049
I agree. The first creature that came to mind was the rake, nothing else. However, according to the author, it is not.
I loved the story, very much.
4625049
I agree. The first creature that came to mind was the rake, nothing else. However, according to the author, it is not.
Yes. Dark. Quite dark.
4654287 I'm glad you enjoyed it. I love the support.