Big Macintosh is finally going to marry Fluttershy, but he doesn't know how he should propose. To figure out how, he asks his three best friends for advice: Caramel, Mr. Cake, and Braeburn. Hilarity ensues. Will any attempts to propose work?
Caramel and Big Macintosh have been dating for a little over two years now, and with the Apple Family Reunion approaching Big Macintosh struggles to decide if he's ready to invite Caramel and take their relationship to the next level.
As unbelievable as it may seem, Braeburn is still single! And naturally, he'd like not to be. So while he's in Ponyville, Big Mac agrees to try out speed dating with him. **Crack Ships Within**
Twilight-chan must overcome the evil bully Sunset Shimmer-san to become the super hot bishie Flash sentry-senpai's girlfriend! Will Twilight-chan overcome Sunset-chan's evil or will her true love prevail? Find out in this fic!
THese are all pretty good, though i might prefer a bit more dialogue in the third chapter. They're all short, but just enough to make their point, and I like that.
4621489 Thank ya, kind author of that awesome Cheerilee "trapped in a shipping card game" fic! That was the one that convinced me to write for the contest, yannow. Pulled it off brilliantly, you did.
Third chapter was an interesting break from dialogue, because Big Mac doesn't say much except in his own thoughts. Eventually decided to just not have dialogue in it at all on a whim, but I can see how any dialogue spoken there would be taken as stronger.
4622390 Considering you've got 8 entries now, I'd say you've probably got a fairly good chance of beating me now. XP THanks for the compliment, and I'm glad to hear you liked my work enough to participate in the contest.
Hey! Sorry for taking so long to reply but I'm flattered you did a reading for it. :D Sad that I can't hear it since the video seems to have been removed, but the thought still makes me happy!
6282137 Yup, I agree with ya. While not the one I most dislike in the collection, it's a pretty plain short. But thanks for taking the time to read and review these anyway!
6466947 I imagined it some time in the future after Simple Ways! Of course, if people see the insinuation of Rarijack in that episode, who am I to say it isn't there?
6526677 That's an interesting idea because I didn't have that episode in mind at all. This was meant to be something in TSSSF's Of Ponies and Peril dystopian universe but it strangely does fit that episode.
THese are all pretty good, though i might prefer a bit more dialogue in the third chapter. They're all short, but just enough to make their point, and I like that.
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Thank ya, kind author of that awesome Cheerilee "trapped in a shipping card game" fic! That was the one that convinced me to write for the contest, yannow. Pulled it off brilliantly, you did.
Third chapter was an interesting break from dialogue, because Big Mac doesn't say much except in his own thoughts. Eventually decided to just not have dialogue in it at all on a whim, but I can see how any dialogue spoken there would be taken as stronger.
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Considering you've got 8 entries now, I'd say you've probably got a fairly good chance of beating me now. XP THanks for the compliment, and I'm glad to hear you liked my work enough to participate in the contest.
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Quality, not quantity!
Hi there. I hope you don't mind, but I liked this chapter so much, I have adapted it into an audio version on YouTube:
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Hey! Sorry for taking so long to reply but I'm flattered you did a reading for it. :D Sad that I can't hear it since the video seems to have been removed, but the thought still makes me happy!
Ah dammit, this was great on so many levels. :D
Oh, and I don't know what happened with Scribbler's reading, but it's still there.
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Oh gosh, that was amazing. I am so flattered and happy and excited and squeeee.
Thanks for linking it and I'm glad you enjoyed the story!
Noice.
I love this so much.
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So much of the good kind of wat.
Huh. I kinda thought you were going to go for "He's gay" as the reason why he can't get mares. o.O
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Glad to subvert expectation!
Unfortunately, this one's just completely summed up in the blurb at the top. :/
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Yup, I agree with ya. While not the one I most dislike in the collection, it's a pretty plain short. But thanks for taking the time to read and review these anyway!
So does this take place sometime after Simple Ways? Or are you insinuating Rarijack in the middle of that episode?
6466947 I imagined it some time in the future after Simple Ways! Of course, if people see the insinuation of Rarijack in that episode, who am I to say it isn't there?
Huh, kinda neat. Is this an extension of Inspiration Manifestation?
6526677 That's an interesting idea because I didn't have that episode in mind at all. This was meant to be something in TSSSF's Of Ponies and Peril dystopian universe but it strangely does fit that episode.
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Oh, is that what that was a reference to? :O I apparently don't know my TSSSF lore very well!
That was surprising. :O
what XD well, this series has been fun!
6677506 Thanks for reading it! :D I'm flattered you went through the whole thing.
Well, this was certainly an interesting mini-fic.