Still want to see what ends up happening to Octavia, but snuggles and feelings and mebbe more is also lovely - and probably something most ponies with the Service don't see enough of, come to think of it!
Swapping stories over dinner, I told of rescuing Mrs. Crust from her own ignorance and stupidity a few days ago. “– And then when we left she insisted we take the ring with us. She refused to have it in her house!”
Wait, aren't they supposed to keep client-rescuer confidentiality? Is it because the rescue was really just meant as a test of character and intellect instead of a kink-gone-wrong?
7240685 Bellchaser has a somewhat flexible approach to following the rules, especially when she can't see how bending them a bit could harm anything and the risk of getting caught is low. (But even where the risk of getting caught does exist, such as back in Chapter 1 when she talked Finey into covering for her while she ditched work).
7240726 Bending the rules is one thing, but this is out-and-out breaking them. On the other side, I can somewhat see how she may not think of it as that big of an issue in this case.
7240938 Well, she's not identifying the client she's speaking about, so to her it's just bending.
(Hmm, I can see it may be confusing that the narration refers to Upper Crust by name, whereas the intention is that Bellchaser doesn't actually utter that name).
7240990 Oh. Well then, if no name was revealed, then I see no issues with Bellchaser's story. It's a delicate balance, isn't it? Getting your message across just right, but doing it without being too wordy.
About Bellchaser. She already was fucked, but it is not bed scene what makes me really hard in here. Being chained in kitchen after seks, where she find Cressie back then, it's so... hnng hnng.
7900534 Thank you. The only response I've gotten on that particular detail so far was, "she's right, not very exciting", so it's nice to know there are readers who appreciate it.
Ok this pokey pierce is starting to piss me off, in his first chapter he had a lap, ponies don't have laps! In this chapter he's eating beef stroganoff, ponies arent suposed to eat beef stroganoff! Bondage isn't exactly my cup of tea but even I know your not supposed to break character and he's done it twice! Lets just hope it doesnt happen again.
10079083 I think you misread; it wasn't beeF stroganoff.
The lap, I'll admit, looks like a bit of a slip when I reread the sequence. The image in my head still works with him sitting in the dog-like pose ponies in the show use, but "lap" is probably not the right word to use. I wonder what to correct it to. Flank, perhaps.
7202074
Yay aftercare!
Still want to see what ends up happening to Octavia, but snuggles and feelings and mebbe more is also lovely - and probably something most ponies with the Service don't see enough of, come to think of it!
Next chapter please.
7225288
It's being written. These things take time.
(See my blog post if you're particularly impatient.)
7225911
Thanks. I do enjoy this story a great deal.
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So I surmised. Thanks!
Wait, aren't they supposed to keep client-rescuer confidentiality? Is it because the rescue was really just meant as a test of character and intellect instead of a kink-gone-wrong?
7240685
Bellchaser has a somewhat flexible approach to following the rules, especially when she can't see how bending them a bit could harm anything and the risk of getting caught is low. (But even where the risk of getting caught does exist, such as back in Chapter 1 when she talked Finey into covering for her while she ditched work).
Also, she really doesn't like Upper Crust.
7240726 Bending the rules is one thing, but this is out-and-out breaking them. On the other side, I can somewhat see how she may not think of it as that big of an issue in this case.
7240938
Well, she's not identifying the client she's speaking about, so to her it's just bending.
(Hmm, I can see it may be confusing that the narration refers to Upper Crust by name, whereas the intention is that Bellchaser doesn't actually utter that name).
7240990 Oh. Well then, if no name was revealed, then I see no issues with Bellchaser's story.
It's a delicate balance, isn't it? Getting your message across just right, but doing it without being too wordy.
7241582
I've reworded it to avoid confusing mentions by name now.
About Bellchaser. She already was fucked, but it is not bed scene what makes me really hard in here. Being chained in kitchen after seks, where she find Cressie back then, it's so... hnng hnng.
7900534
Thank you. The only response I've gotten on that particular detail so far was, "she's right, not very exciting", so it's nice to know there are readers who appreciate it.
Ok this pokey pierce is starting to piss me off, in his first chapter he had a lap, ponies don't have laps! In this chapter he's eating beef stroganoff, ponies arent suposed to eat beef stroganoff! Bondage isn't exactly my cup of tea but even I know your not supposed to break character and he's done it twice! Lets just hope it doesnt happen again.
10079083
I think you misread; it wasn't beeF stroganoff.
The lap, I'll admit, looks like a bit of a slip when I reread the sequence. The image in my head still works with him sitting in the dog-like pose ponies in the show use, but "lap" is probably not the right word to use. I wonder what to correct it to. Flank, perhaps.