And thanks, that is high praise. Didya see that, everybody? I've got an OC that people-who-aren't-me ship with a fan-beloved canon pony! #totallynotgarystu
My only complaint is that I never know if a new chapter is going to be a clopfest or a feels-train (or both). It makes it a little hard to know where and when I should read it.
7531780 Sorry. I generally aim for a mixture, though my accuracy in hitting that mixture varies with the demands and opportunities of the grand plot.
Looking through my notes now, it looks like all of the remaining chapters will be mostly story-heavy with no really festive clop (except perhaps for the final chapter, if sufficient inspiration manifests). On the other hand, there will be situations scattered throughout that could get someone off if they have the right fetishes.
7535016 Thanks, that's good to know. I'll happily continue reading this one for the plot (no pun intended).
If I was attempting to write a story of this nature, I'd be tempted to stick an author's comment at the start of each chapter, to let people know what kind of content to expect. I can't really say if that's a good idea or not, but I just thought I'd throw it out there.
I also want to add that while I've enjoyed a lot of things in this story, I found the idea of a popular suicide-jumper's spot, in a world where maybe a third (give or take) of the population can fly, to be a particularly interesting bit of world-building. Good work!
that first part made me think of a book, "Oath of fealty", involving an "arcology", a giant building 1 mile long, 1 mile wide, and 1000 feet high! being the tallest building in LA, it naturally attracted suicide Jumpers. so most of the roof had fancy fences, except for one spot that had... a diving board. there were also hidden cameras, and a fancy gadget that would extend a hidden net to catch anyone who actually jumped. the security guards had set up a betting pool on how the would-be suicides would react when they saw the board-some would laugh!
That's so sad. And I kinda want him to get with Vinyl somehow, still.
Ah! So good! Need more!
Also, I totally ship Vinyl and Finey. I ship it with no shame!
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Never fear; more is underway.
And thanks, that is high praise.
Didya see that, everybody? I've got an OC that people-who-aren't-me ship with a fan-beloved canon pony! #totallynotgarystu
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And you only needed to get him raped and hurt by said canon pony and her marefriend!
My only complaint is that I never know if a new chapter is going to be a clopfest or a feels-train (or both). It makes it a little hard to know where and when I should read it.
7531780
Sorry. I generally aim for a mixture, though my accuracy in hitting that mixture varies with the demands and opportunities of the grand plot.
Looking through my notes now, it looks like all of the remaining chapters will be mostly story-heavy with no really festive clop (except perhaps for the final chapter, if sufficient inspiration manifests). On the other hand, there will be situations scattered throughout that could get someone off if they have the right fetishes.
7535016
Thanks, that's good to know. I'll happily continue reading this one for the plot (no pun intended).
If I was attempting to write a story of this nature, I'd be tempted to stick an author's comment at the start of each chapter, to let people know what kind of content to expect. I can't really say if that's a good idea or not, but I just thought I'd throw it out there.
I also want to add that while I've enjoyed a lot of things in this story, I found the idea of a popular suicide-jumper's spot, in a world where maybe a third (give or take) of the population can fly, to be a particularly interesting bit of world-building. Good work!
that first part made me think of a book, "Oath of fealty", involving an "arcology", a giant building 1 mile long, 1 mile wide, and 1000 feet high! being the tallest building in LA, it naturally attracted suicide Jumpers. so most of the roof had fancy fences, except for one spot that had...
a diving board.
there were also hidden cameras, and a fancy gadget that would extend a hidden net to catch anyone who actually jumped. the security guards had set up a betting pool on how the would-be suicides would react when they saw the board-some would laugh!