The stars are not just balls of fires. They are sometimes great ponies that have passed onto a new part of life. This is the story of one of them.
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Hmmm...
Upon reading, good plot,idea,and everything. Just needs punctuation,and a few spellchecked words, and this could be a masterpiece!
Very interesting story, could've used a little more detail specially in the two other chapters but an interesting story nonetheless, have a green thumb.
Also couldn't help but notice some errors.
It's supposed to be since instead of science.
You have an extra R at the end of fire, or maybe you ment to put fiery.
There is supposed to be an apostrophe in Figures.
Another missing apostrophe (Nothing's).
you need to make your storys longer
Woah, um.... ok... good story