How A Star Is Made

by Marciline

Not All Secrets Are Revealed

Five years later, the very creature was making his way to Canterlot.
"How is she?"
"She is coping well as a star, and I have very high hopes for her."
"She passed byond my sight over a year ago, so I was very worried."
"Yes, she has left the current galaxy and is moving towards other distant galaxies."
"Should we ever tell Twilight who helped her defeat Tirerk?"
"No, although she is the one of the best princesses I have ever watched, I do not feel she's ready to know all the secrets of Equestira."
"But-"
"Soon, when she is much older."
"Very well."

Comments

[ThatBatJess]

Hmmm...

[ThatBatJess]

Upon reading, good plot,idea,and everything. Just needs punctuation,and a few spellchecked words, and this could be a masterpiece!

[darksome]

you need to make your storys longer

[Iroh Legoman]

Woah, um.... ok... good story