A continuation of the Xenoverse the day of Twilight's ascension in which an Irish blacksmith and hunter named Galen, who was raised in a medieval tourist trap of a village is brought to Equestria, along with his dog, due to said ascension.
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Now it's really starting to get good!
Applejack and Galen, in particular, are so well-suited for one another. Cut from the same cloth. But for me, the most enjoyable part of this chapter was the way Applejack and Pinkie Pie decide to team up with each other on getting Galen.
"You in?" / "I'm in."
Very little 'beating around the bush,' these two, almost offhanded how they agree to collaborate on this.
"We pull this off, you and I'll be lovers with each other, sharing the same guy. Possibly even wives, later on down the line." / "We pull this off, I'm down with that. You're cool."
And that makes it so fun and interesting! Now it's all a matter of seeing how the two of them set out to reel the guy in… I'm excited to see what comes next, Etherealunesence! This story's very well paced!
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I'm just pulling inspiration from the show for the most part. It seems like AJ would end up scaring off most of the stallions that would come out to the farm with the amount of both work and commitment asked of them. Pinkie Pie can be surprisingly frank, especially in these situations and AJ would really appreciate the honesty from her, even if she would be fairly embarrassed as she disclosed those budding feelings herself. As far as Galen goes, he's just solid. He won't dawdle when something needs done and when there's down time, he's more than willing to exploit it for all it has lol He's basically the pinnacle of the work hard play hard trope with a healthy dose of the dauntless protector trope as well if you can gauge his death threat to Celestia in no uncertain terms.
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Thank you very much I'll do my best.
4757715 I hope he doesn't forgive Celestia anytime soon.
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Oh, I thought I had mentioned it... He went up to Canterlot for a comic convention and won't be back until the end of the "week." Figured I would do a bit of a parallel with the actual Comi-Con Just imagine how they're going to have to repurpose a section of both the Library and Lero's house for his stuff when he comes back