Rarity is Missing! Adventure in the Everfree Forest

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Rarity is Missing! Adventure in the Everfree Forest

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Deep within the perilous Everfree Forest, far past the point of no return, Rarity has gone missing. It's up to Twilight Sparkle and her friends to save her, but can they get past their bickering to rescue Rarity in time? Spoiler Alert, probably not.

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Getting Started · 8th Apr 2012 · 2,025 words
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Wherein the Fourth Wall was Eroded · 10th Apr 2012 · 1,957 words
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Gem

Gem #1 · Apr 8th, 2012 · · · Getting Started ·

"This was why"

Thumbed up and favourited, who needs exposition?

My Predicted Ending (Probably Wrong, but meh):
Rarity : "My goodness! Where have you all been?"
Twilight : "We were looking for you in the Everfree Forest!"
Rarity : "What would I go in there for? It's all... dirty and icky, ugh. I've been *INSERT MUNDANE REASON FOR ABSENCE HERE* all day!"
Everypony Else : *facehoof*

THE END
*Waits for award*

Richardson

Richardson #2 · Apr 8th, 2012 · · · Getting Started ·

Rarity had better come out of this alive (even if she does spend a few days/weeks/months doing her best impression of a statue)

Gem

Gem #3 · Apr 9th, 2012 · · · Wherein the Fourth Wall was Eroded ·

Another good chapter!

Also, I'm either an idiot, or I found an error:
"Remembering the teleport spell that she used often, and that the author had completely not forgotten about, she concentrated and -poof- she disappeared, leaving the wild animal bewildered.
Unluckily for her, the author had actually not forgotten about her teleport spell, and she reappeared right behind the beast. Cursing the railroad plot she found herself in, Twilight began to run again."

I think one of those nots shouldn't be there