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Twidashforever


Something isn't beautiful because it lasts.

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@Twidashforever...

I see you got through your previous (TiM #5) fan-fiction despite its minor pseudo-controversy over OCs.

However... Once again, you miss properly crediting &/or Source Link-ing your cover image.

This fan-artwork comes from This Longest Night, by the very talented DeviantArt(ist) NyuuChanDiannePie, which was drawn for its own fan-fiction as well. NyuuChanDiannePie's works have inspired many a fan-fiction, been the inspiration for more fan-artworks, and even inspired MLP-fans to compose songs & music from them.

4560084
sourced and credited, thanks for the heads up

4561524...

Glad to help. I felt this needed to be pointed out (again) for you, especially since your profile picture is another of NyuuChanDiannePie's fan-artworks (TwiDash in the Rain for that one, if you did not know).

Is this another one off or is it the new story

4565169
It was going to be another story...

4565205 so this is the next big one

hopefully people will read the previous ones first, or at least enough to have enough understanding so that they won't just blatantly dislike it.

4566668
that would be a nice thought.


Not holding my breath though

4566689 well no blatant rage comments yet. so that's a start.

4566692
nope just 8 down votes, with zero actual comments about the story.

Small victories I guess...

4566697 small victories can lead to a large victory in the war on people that hate reading lots of stuff

4566705
Lol that's true. I find my stories generally get a lot of hate at first but they age really well

4566705
I will admit to being confused though, logically at this point in the overall story this one should not have a single down vote.

Not that its that good mind you but simply because if you don't like my storytelling, plot, characters, spelling, etc... You should have stop reading several stories ago

Unless they liked all my other stories and this is the one that was too much (I doubt it)

4566712 not in my case i found your stories halfway through BOI and that's what i started on, but when i saw references to previous stories i thought "when did this happen" and so i went back, read the rest and this is now my tied 2nd series on fimfiction.

4566780 doubt it, tbh i lost it when rainbow said to aurora "you better be getting fat"

4566797
I laughed my ass off writing that


and Ataxia on the train was funny as hell too.

4566802 yeah but with Ataxia she's either being the dangerous mare she is or being the violent/impatient mare she is. she's a mare of a dangerous combination. make me wonder if she ever ends up with her equivalent of bright dawn, what will happen to that guy?

4566792
I dont hate on someone who starts half way though...
Provided they accept that they might be missing something that was already explained and don't bring that bias into their opinion of the story.

4566814 I keep my bias for a full read story that still somehow doesn't make sense to me. so you've managed to keep mine under lock and key and thrown into tartarus

4566808
he would find himself minus his 'favorite member'

If he really pissed her off, she might make him eat it

4566826 or make him eat it with the "opposite direction"

4566829
that too lol.

hell she might make him do both. (save the meal for last)

4566837 simply make him eat that alone with his previous meal again.

4566843
hmm... I am starting to get ideas....


naa.. Right now she doest feel that way about anyone.-well one pony-

She is more likely to simply fuck a guy and leave him on the curb.

4566854 unless he insults Rarity the way blood dawn insulted twi and rainbow. especially if rarity's age fully catches up

4566870 all i know is whatever Ataxia ends up doing to that guy i would probably wince in sympathetic pain.

still gotta say that this is tied for my tied 2nd favorite series on all of fimfiction, simply because i don't know whether sometimes to laugh or cry at certain points

4566932
i try and cause both....
when you have both side (happy and sad) it enhances the other.
you really feel for someone who suffered loss if you know what they lost
when they are legitimately happy, you're happy for them because they suffered loss


I gotta ask, what is your favorite? i might want to check it out

4566966 yeah.

my favorite is The Chase by Kudzuhaiku, i like it mostly cos it's ... "different" may or may not be the right word.

4566989
added to read later, Not sure when I will get to it though.


How did you like the wedding scene?

Comment posted by Somepony Unstable 3224 deleted Jun 18th, 2014

4567020 and the one that's tied alongside yours is "Undead Equestria" by Sorren. it really really depends on whether you like the "zombie apocalypse" stories

4567020 i found it simply ... beautiful may be the right word but to me doesn't seem strong enough. it's not often weddings get to me (and i should know i was my aunties a few weeks ago and i was soooo bored) but i was tearing up a little.

4567034 I think I want those to be my wedding vows when i get married

4567069 i think i might try and "crash" the wedding with me and my gf dressed as radiant and firestar. or would that be grounds for you to possibly beat the shit into me :rainbowderp:

4567094 might bring the whole cast. now that'd be a wedding photo.

although i'd need time to make that many costumes, or have them made since i am worthless with making anything made with fabric

4567172
You and me both lol

Although that might not be entirely true... I used to think I didnt have a creative bone in my body.. Hell before feb I have never written anything before.

4567172
You and me both lol

Although that might not be entirely true... I used to think I didnt have a creative bone in my body.. Hell before feb I have never written anything before.

4567273 oh trust me i have a lot of creative bones, but i have a disorder which makes my hands have less coordination so i'd probably end sewing myself to the costume

4567273 wait a minute, you wrote all these stories between feb and now?

4567291
yep, first chapter of TiM published on Feb 3rd

270,000 words in 4.5 months.

i just thought of a question for you. out of all the OC's you've added to TIM, which one is your favorite?

4570911

Firestar. Simply because I never planned for her to be a character. She came into the story practically on her own and built herself from there

4570921 i would agree. if Ataxia and Aurora weren't in this.

4570923 somedays I feel like I left Aurora with the short end of the stick

All her siblings and friends are powerhouses. She was just a model

Although I think it gives her character though

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