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It's here!
Four years in the making
It's also great!
Can't get enough of bookworm Twilight, who breaks her dom character to ramble on her latest discoveries. Love Rainbow with her ever-present awesome/softie dualism. Enthusiastic about their relation, started on a bizarre note but now on a conventional route and headed for the next great challenge: other ponies.
The two discussing what is and isn't off-limits gives me Clocktower vibes. It's different in an interesting way from the prequel, I Wonder where this discussion will go.
I learned something new today, "fleece mat" and "EFTJ" are the latest additions to my vocabulary. I blame Twilight.
The cover art is superb, pudge got such a great rainbow. Love the tattoo and the haircut, and her facial expression too. That cover makes justice to this story's awesomeness. Will the choker be put to good use?
Looking forward to the next chapters and everything they'll bring, both clop and story. I'm excited for this!
Congratulations on hitting the feature box!
Re-upload?
yes <3
Not my favorite "genre" as such, but it's twidash, and I'm still waiting to see the hilarity when they find Celestia instead of Spike.
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Four years and Twi’s still completely out of fucks to give. May the glorious insanity commence.
A sequel?!?! IT IS!!!!!!! high pitched fangirl scream *cough* I mean, cool.
moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
I may or may not have squeed when I saw what this is a sequel to.
RD is worried because Spike doesn't know about Twilight's changes. Well, Spike,Celestia,Luna,and a few others from Canterlot.
i can just hear rd making puppy noises
You got me. You dirty bitch you got me. Now I gotta wait to read more. I'm gonna read your other shit to pass the time
YES!!!
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No. Twidash decided to come back and write again.
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Twidash doesn't welch on his bets.
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Hah, you won't regret that.
Well, unless a few typos drive you crazy.
Still worth it!
Welcome back.
I always thought of Rainbow Dash as more of an ESTP. That said I don't know enough about Myers-Briggs to know how much that would alter the story. I'd class Twilight as INTJ. Cool that you have Sparklebutt using it and tying it into how she is 'training' Rainbow.
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I was 50/50 between the two. But upon further reflection I think you're right. Updated.
Color me surprised. One of my favorite stories got the sequel. Glad to see you back, this is a definite track.
I'm surprised Twilight's out-of-date enough to use the Myers-Briggs types.
I'm enjoying how you've loaded this with potential drama bombs from the start. While I want life to be perfect and sexy and fun for the two, I know it's a better story if there's challenges. I expect the payoff would be better for it, too.
OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH OH MY GOSH!!!
YOU'RE BACK! The story continues! I'm so excited!
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Damnit... this is like... my perfect fantasy... except my perfect fantasy requires Starlight or Applejack to be my mistress, and oooh... I like this story... being a nymphophile doesn't help matters...
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'Mistress Applejack' hm? That's cool.
Woah there; TMI, bro!
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Really? TMI on a story like this? Nah... But yes, Mistress Applejack cause I figure she'd be like, the mean, loving mistress
Err... Where's Celestia? She teleported there in the end of BGT, and this is sequel, where is she?
And how about Pinkie? Twilight hurt her quite badly, will we see an apology scene, deeply emotional and helpful for Pinkie?
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It's about 3 days too early for Celestia's entrance. The end of BGT skipped ahead 5 days, this story covers those days (well some of those days).
Not saying we won't see some of the conversation with Celestia, but there were a lot of events that would be skipped if it picked up exactly where the last one left off (such as the conversations with the rest of the Mane 6). As such I decided to backtrack a little bit.
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Oh! That makes sense. Thanks!
weeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee FUN stuff, Also “Spke, get off me!” Needs to be corrected to: “Spike, get off me!”
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Good eye, thanks.
Poor Spike
Bowl on the floor, not bowel.. I normally don’t pester people about small mistakes like a single mistyped letter, but it changes the entire meaning of the situation, and it is entirely absurd and out of context.
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Edited. Thanks!
New chapter hype
It’s refreshing to see through such pure eyes after all the debauchery of the prequel. It brings out the genunity of the love between the two, with TiM-like feels. 10/10 would hug.
Dear sweet innocent Scoots
How can it be that after everything that happened up to this point every show of affection between Rainbow and Twilight feels like the first time all over again? From Scoots to Spike to pseudo-privacy, they’re pouring out so much emotion. Is it wrong of me to like this better than porn? Porn is awesome too, I swear!
I really enjoyed the original, but this is so much better.
Generally if I'm reading anything tagged Mature it's gore/action type reasons, but uh, yeah, got recommended to read Bad Girl Twilight and this is solid, 10/10 would recommend.
Scire had it right, you can see the emotion and where and how they care for each other. That and I like TwiDash as a pairing so hey.
Must resist desires for TwiDash Scoot adoption.
Thank you for that moment.
I absolutely love that you have come back and started writing again. TiM is one of my favorite series, and is the one I have reread most on the site. That being said I had trouble with just the first paragraph of this one. I don't know if the editors have changed or if it's something else, but the tenses need correction.
At that time,
atin that moment, she found it rather easy to forget the past few days. She could close her eyes andlostlose herself in the feeling, inof the soothing cream being placed against her tender back and wings.The rest of the chapter makes me giggle like an idiot- well done.
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edited, thanks
And there's more TiM coming. :)
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so exciting. I love the detail in the emotions, very much the best and most lively Twidash fic!
Lovely.
Pfffff well Shining!
“But no more kink-shaming, Rainbow. Everypony has their own likes and dislikes. And they’re nothing to be made fun of.”
Very true words that sadly few people bother to listen to.
*dies laughing*
Oh, Shiny, you walked right into that one. Has nopony ever told you you should have scouts out to prevent being ambushed so easily?