It's called garbage can, not garbage can't.
Rainbow Dash finds herself terrified of one of her best friends without cause or reason. What follows is how she deals with the unlikely situation with the help of her friends.
Contains unrepentant Appledash, sex themes and implied and inferred violence. Nothing graphic, but probably worth a gore tag.
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That was certainly... different. Not the most well-written tale I've ever read, but it certainly was the most original AppleDash I've seen in a LONG time.
wasnt celestia supposed to help defeat the nightmare?
4553233 I think i had a reason for not doing that but i can't remember what it was. Huh. I'll consider explaining that, it's certainly a rather large hole i left staring at me.
4552054 Thanks! I'm absolutely new to writing and I have a lot to learn so it means a lot a few people can find a some good things to say about my first work.
Man, that was one hell of a read! I really got a kick out of this. Call me crazy, but I have always like storys about people loseing there mind. And I don't usually find any good storys like that on fimfiction. But this one was well written, funny, heart-warming and most importently it had appledash shipping. Im more then happy to keep reading your stories, even if there nothing like this. A job well done.
4556099 Well I'd like to keep a large variety between stuff i'm planning on writing but knowing my relentless penchant towards appledash I have no idea how effective that wishful thinking will be. But you can definitely expect more insanity from me.
I call that original, that's for sure!
That last line:
I really enjoyed that! It was original and entertaining I hope you write more fics in the future because that was amazing!
That was an excellent story, very original. This has a lot of potential for a sequel. Anyway I loved it, this is certainly worthy of a thumbs up.
4556129 Let the Appledash flow through you. It is the ship that will make you rise to the heavens and claim the golden thrown and you shall be a God Hahahahaha!
Sorry about that, but seriously Appledash is awesome.
Luna: That whore I'm gonna tear her a new...
Celestia: Shut up! I'm trying to sleep!
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5590354 Cheers. This was my very first story, way back when, so it's nice to know people still like it.
I liked it until I got to the end because we still have no idea why she is having nightmares it feels like you just gave up.
Great story, I loved every second of it! My only complaint would be that when a scene changes, there's no warning that the change happened. Usually in the fics I've read, there would be a gray line running across the screen, but there were no such lines here, causing me to be confused about how rainbow dash was talking to fluttershy when she clearly left just a second earlier. But storywise, it was great!
This was a really funny and cute story. I really like the pacing and the characters, even with such a silly premise I still thinks that the characters are in character, at least, to the mood of the fic, wich is in general, one of the things I most liked of it. I think you settled a certain mood for this comedy and you were prety skilled to mantain it even thoug the "dark" parts.
Is a shame thoug that you couldn't finish the little Luna arc. I understand that this was your first fic, so, super cool work anyway.
6695547 Cheers. Glad this old thing still gets a view now and then!
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9392486 Cheers man. This is literally my first story, so it's always nice to see it get some love, despite its many (in my opinion) flaws.
If that isn't a mood then I don't know what is. I feel for ya flutters.