Average brony fan girl who does work on deviantart and loves Appledash<3<3<3
If the apple family is known for anything besides their apples,its their cider and tonight marks the 20th anniversary of pure success and its main family member Applejack has decided to plan a party. All goes well until a certain rainbow maned Pegasus friend drops by that turns it into a long lonesome night of bickering,laughs,drinking and untold confessions that unfurl in a locked basement,with two mares and a supply of cider.
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So far so good. Good job, i really am looking forward to future chapters. And welcome to the world of Fimfiction.
3739977 Thank you oh so very much Mr Sombra,I appreciate the feedback!
oh my
I love Appledash
The story is looking great.
3745612 Thanks you!
Could be a little bit longer, but still a great story.
3752179 Im planning to make it a longer story, just with smaller chapters :-)
Okie dokie lokie :)
pretty damn good
And then they [censored by the god damn FCC]
Keep it up x3
nice, but oof
Well that..ya cant trust things that hang on ceilings
wha? so sweet, but the last part was so random
OwX.......-twitching- oh me gosh
uh oh. good chapter
beautiful dude
Okay first off let me say I do enjoy this fic a lot, but I think the potential is a little broken by choppy wording here and there. Mind you the criticism is in good faith.
First:
You actually want the word course here
Second:
Did you mean "At how far her family's legacy of an apple farm had come"?
Third:
"In attendance" would flow a bit better I think.
Forth:(See the problems are so minor)
I think you were going for "slowly" and so close but the other problem was "too" should have been "to"
Those were only a few of the minor things I noticed I figured I'd point them out since I know I'd love these types of opinions on my story's, but alas I haven't gotten them yet.
Ah well I shall continue reading I like it thus far! 
If you'd like me to comb it for more edits like that, I would willingly do so any time!
Still seeing those minor choppy bits, but still thoroughly enjoying where the story is going!
Loving it!
She sued AJ with music?! Awesome!
It made me laugh but I knew what you meant all the same. Another good chapter, them feels are starting! 
Whoa severe case of claustrophobia there Dashie! Watch out there Apple--
Nuuu!!!
Dang nabbit ceiling I told you to stop spontaneously combusting!
That last chapter seemed a bit overly rushed, but all things considered good job.
Ok last chapter
I cried at the end cause I thought RD died . But I'm so happy shes alive 
4124833 It looks at ya....in a certain way!!!
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Haha aww dont you worry about Dashie,she is all good
Nice story.
~ADG