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Oh this was interesting. But I got to say I love that you have thrown Captain Titus into this. I really like him.
432851 A good few characters will make an appearance. And considering the horus heresy never took place in this universe, who can tell who's going to show up.
oh shit the Emperor might make an appearance.
This is so freakin badass
sweet Titus is in the story. oh and question: is Proteus the space marine that turned Titus in to the Inquisition for "heresy"? i just cant remember exactly. anyway great chapter, keep up the good work, and i cant wait for the next one haha!
celestia has hands?
433620 No, that would be Leandros. Proteus is the space marine in the 'movie' Ultramarines.
434064 Story would have been ruined if they were quadriped. Tried it and couldn't take it seriously enough. I was considering changing it back but it would seem people enjoy the anthro approach.
434131 All pony characters are anthro, it better compliments their interaction with the space marines and other species that may enter the picture.
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Then you might as well have made your own species up and made a war-hammer fic, whats a pony fic without the pony?
Look at the other warhammer fics here to see how to write them as quads.
434820 Technically the only warhammer element in the universe it is set in are the space marines, everything else is customized. I'm sorry you don't find the anthro aspect of the story appealing, but this is my story and I will write it my own way.
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Ah thanks for the correction dude. Oh and the dude from the Ultramarines movie? Dayum I didn't expect him to get a reference in this story but then again I also didn't expect Titus to be there as well haha!
435651 The only reason I made the pony characters anthro is because of the way they interact with marines and other species. Hooves are just very impractical, especially when I'm using an element of reality when it comes to physics. Short version : Hooves can't hold guns :/
442531 Thank you for your support, and I will look into the proof reading. Did not organize a proof reader as the last one took far to long.
I LOVE THIS STORY
its very unique never seen an anthro-pony warhammer crossover
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Remember, the Blood Angels have your back on this one...
Excellent story. And thanks to the Emperor. Finally someone thought anthro ponies into this dark and cruel universe fits much better than those four-legged ponies.
Sorry, your Space Marines are too warm and fuzzy for me. Very OoC.
If Ajax'd been an Inquisitor, I'd wrap my brain around it because of the faction that works with Xenos. If he'd been Tau or Eldar, the same. Heck, even 5th Ed. Necron would work.
I gave it a good shot, but this chapter broke my suspension of disbelief.
result of exorcise or activity.
Exercise.
where they wreck chaos we bring order.”
Wreak.
and most of them were on our behalf.”
To do something on someone's behalf means you carried out an action for that someone. I assume this passage refers to Celestia assuming responsibility for her own actions. Perhaps try "on our part."
In fury it caste a thousand
Cast.
very Noblebright
A chapter built on the teachings of Titus would pretty much be the most OP thing ever. It'd be kinda like a combination of these "Halo Skulls" ideals and the ideals of the Celestial Lions with, of course, the "use your effing brain" and "completing the mission comes before honor" methods of Captain Titus.
EDIT: Deleted the rest of my comment because of TL;DR.
I wonder Will there be a Warhammer 40k, Equestria divided crossover.