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Shortly after her 1000 year isolation on the moon, Princess Luna finds herself lonely. That is until she enters the dream world of the only human in Equestria, Anon. Luna poses as a human girl named Laura in his dream who Anon falls in love with, and she too falls in love with Anon. Luna realizes she must confess to her true identity if she ever wants any chance of a relationship beyond the dreaming realm.
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Interesting start, though I think you could make it a bit clearer that you're changing the pov of the characters.
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Doing the above would do just fine.
Thanks for the feedback. I'll make the pov changes clearer.
I'm interested to see how this turns out. heh heh
How did anon even get to equestria?
Is that something you want me to add in the story?
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Like where this is going...
I'll keep an eye on this...
Don't add how Anon got to Equestria to the story just yet. Put it into the Author's notes or something. Where it is now, I think it'll detract from the story, just my two bits though.
You need to put a horizontal between switching persons so we can keep up easier.
Well, it's really interesting start. I wait for more.
I love it so far. And I guess you went for the whole 'Fluttershy tries to guess Anon fetishes'. Will she approach him with a penguin suit?
*Sees story* OOoOOoo
*Sees update time* Awwww...
Nice story but just one question have u stopped writing or r u writing many episodes at once