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WARNING: This story contains incredibly generic Appledash. Because it's the best ship. Deal with it.

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Comments ( 29 )

I'll just drop a comment to say that I liked this story :-)

You should make a longer one next time though :-P I'd love to read it if you did

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I have two longer, more "serious" ship/clop fics in the works... but production is kinda frozen atm due to various stuff.

#3 · Jul 19th, 2011 · · ·

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#4 · Jul 25th, 2011 · · ·

Damn it! Why can't people accept RD IS STRAIGHT! :rainbowdetermined2:

If you need to make these Romatic stories make her be in love with a COLT! A Wonderbolt is an idea! :rainbowhuh:

720

yeah she could be straight, but it wouldn't be as much fun :rainbowkiss:

720

then write your own story where she dates one also great story

720
rainbow dash has actually been acknowledged as straight.
people can have their opinoins and i won't hold it against them but it's always good to know the truth.
also, this fan fic is okay but i would like it to be longer. probably cause i usually read long ones.

I like this shipping, but a straight Dashie is more for me. Cool story tho :twilightsmile: I liked it.

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I personally like to believe that every intelligent creature in Equestria is bi/omni/pan-sexual. They wouldn't care about anything so shallow as gender.

#11 · Oct 5th, 2011 · · ·

read better but this is like in the top 6 i read :twilightsmile:

At first they just laid their
- there

The sun haven’t even fully set yet
- hasn't

When AJ had mentioned... it
- Might add some quotes around "it"

Applejack had hoped her friend would share her feelings, or at least... being the same way
- "be" the same way

Personally I hate comments that say "it's good, but it has some spelling errors", but then never say what they are. I find it at least common courtesy to let an author know *exactly* what needs to be fixed.

Just delete this comment when you're done with it.

12878
How could I have missed those?

Oh well, thank you!

Oh, and the it was actually supposed to be in italics. But when I first copied the text from my gdoc it lost the formatting and stuff.

720
Or me. :me: :heart: :rainbowkiss:
She's just awesome, that's why. :D

6571
Yeah, true. But I think of Rainbow Dash as a straight. :D
I respect your opinion though.

46145
But they're canonically asexual. Since it's a kids show and all.

:facehoof:Lyra and bonbon......it's so obvious:rainbowhuh::facehoof::ajbemused:

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oi dumbass flutterdash is the best ship your opinion is invalid
Fluttershy and dash have known each other alot longer
so it makes more sense
DOI u so stupid

61334

First of all, you have successfully made yourself look like a monumental moron by making the ignorant claim that the author's opinion "is invalid" and calling them "stupid". How immature and narrow-minded of you. You may think Flutterdash is the best ship, but that's not a fact, just an opinion, and I won't try to claim that your opinion is invalid.

Secondly, Fluttershy and RD may have known eachother for longer, but that's not the only factor in relationships. RD and Fluttershy are pretty much polar opposites in terms of personality (Fluttershy being, well, shy, and quiet, whereas RD is outgoing, tough and loud), making it a pretty odd ship in my opinion. AJ and RD and more alike in terms of personality (and interests I'd guess). So actually, Appledash makes much more sense than Flutterdash. But again, that's my opinion, and you're entitled to yours, so let's leave it there.

i like turtles.....

I did a reading on youtube of this, maybe this will get a lot more views now

ok for the record, rd seems more likely to be bi than anything else, but idc ppl choose what they want to believe, and this is ok, there is definately lots of potential, but there are some grammer issues, (dont nazi me about grammer, this is a comment not a damn story, there is a reason i dont write) among other things, overall ok, could be longer, should make a more clop-ish one RANT OVER

Who's a silly pony?
You're a silly pony!
Who is?
You is!
Applejack!
I clicked the link... Sweet Celestia why did I have to click that link!?:twilightangry2::flutterrage:

720 indeed! although i could accept clopfics. but not in general!

pretty good, not a huge fan of the format, but still a very good story.

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