A horrid outcome to the battle between Tirek and Twilight. A what-if story that takes place three years after the fall of the royal sisters.
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Not exactly my best start back, but I hope to get things back to working order in the future chapters. If anyone spots any grammatical errors, I'll be sure to fix them immediately.
I'm so glad to see this chapter released, it's nice to see that Aaron is back to his not-OP state and that the Griffon General from early is dead. The JOHN CENA clothesline, the kiss scene with Nightmare Moon/Luna and Twilight explaining how she detoxified Aaron were hilarious. Hope the next chapter comes soon as the more chapters appear the closer the chances that the snitch gets his nudist ass kicked
sweet been waiting for this
Woo John Cena
#YOUCAN'TSEEME
#NEVERGIVEUP
#RISEABOVETHEHATE
#HUSTLELOYALTYRESPECT
My only criticism is try to use "would" a lot less. Figure out other ways to discribe what's going on. It's not a horrible thing but it does get repetative. Otherwise good. Hapter again Crit.
6850239 Thank you. I'll take that into consideration.
There's a few of those errors, but other than that, GREAT!
6852520 I know. I've been off my game for some time. it may not be my best chapter, but I promise I'm getting back into the grove of things once more.
I'm dying from this chapter XD omg the John Cena part had me dying of laughter. Bro best chapter so far. Please keep up the good work.
6856984 Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. Hope you and everyone else enjoys this weekend's chapter. It's really helping me get back into the groove of things.
Hmm. It's possible he's suffering Magic Sickness, a rare but deadly sickness that can kill those who are sensitive to it and/or not used to wielding magic, be it passive or spell casting (the former for Aaron). Let's not forget the fact that his body is not used to magic as well as being from a non-magic world. However, I am sure like everything else and a strong will to live, his body will adapt to it and the sickness will go away.
Anyway, good work.
6892433 That's actually pretty on the nose, but that's not the whole story. Twilight is going to do some experimentation with synthetic magic and on Aaron's physiology when she gets the proper equipment. Though, the reason I had the magic sickness implanted was to give Aaron a temporary source of power, but at a cost. Besides, you only saw one of three effects the stuff has on him.
AND HIS NAME IS JOHN CENA!!!!
Omg that was so hilarious!!! Best part! XDDD
JOHN CENA!!!! HAHAHA that line alone made this chapter