A horrid outcome to the battle between Tirek and Twilight. A what-if story that takes place three years after the fall of the royal sisters.
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Thanks for the quick update. Still, it's sad to see Dash has lost hope, but watching Aaron being flustered by AJ's sleepy clinginess and his fear of Shining made it up for me. Thanks for the chapter.
6542452 No problem. I'm glad you guys are liking the fic. It means a lot so many people enjoy it. Though, things are only going to get worse for the heroes.
Interesting chapter, should be interesting to see how this "escape from Avernum" story goes.
6542697 I have no idea what that is, but I'm glad you liked it none the less.
6543303 Thank you very much. I will take your words into consideration on the next chapters. I'm glad you like the concept as well. In all honesty, when I made this I thought that people were going to say it was a crappy knock off of Fallout Equestria. I want this to be my own thing, with my ideas and such. I will try and implement your suggestions. Again, thank you.
Okay, looks like I'm going to be redoing the first two chapters. Hopefully I don't screw this up.
6542705 Look up Spiderweb Software, private, small American family company that makes RPG games based on D&D to a degree. Avernum is where the evil empire that now rules the world sends their "unwanted" (anyone who does not fit in or questions them in any way possible, even saying quietly in public "I think the emperor may be wrong" is more than enough) to an underground cave system called Avernum. The purpose of the Avernum game series is to "escape the pit" (which is what the game was originally called) and take revenge on the empire by assassinating the emperor. Twice. Fun series. Look them up, they have demos. I still have copies of the old 90's edition they were selling, they have since updated the game... Twice... I think with complete graphic overhauls.
Alright, let's see:
Sleepy ponies are best ponies
This part is a bit repetitive.
Gosh, it strikes me deep every time I read a story where Dash's spirit is broken; considering her position as leader, I can only imagine how she must have felt after realizing how hopeless their situation was.
Oh, I can't wait for the next chapter
6544506 Huh. Interesting coincidence. I'll have to look it up and see what that's about. Hopefully I don't do the Rainbow Arc the same as the game. As I've said, I want this story to be my own thing. But I thank you for pointing me in the direction.
6544529 The next chapter will be this weekend. For now, I'm going to redo the first two chapters to make them... well if we're being honest here, not awful.
what aaron is gonna to do and how he tell the other what rainbow dash say?
6545765 I'm presuming you mean "How is Aaron going to communicate with the others and what the plan is". He will be communicating to them through Applejack via dreams, as stated in Chpt. 10. As for the second part, you'll just have to wait for the next chapter.
Hopefully I can get to the second chapter next week.
Holy crap! 100 likes. Thanks guys, that means a lot to me. :) I'm glad you all like it.
Things are getting real spicy!
One question: WHERE THE FUCK IS SPIKE?!?!?!
As another player from Nation States once said, "Crush Their Spirits and You Will Control Their Minds"