I feel like this is mirroring an earlier part of the story. Am I right? I forget what though.
Ooh, I like that split!
"bludgeons" needs an apostrophe
Whew! So now twilight lives on, with this secret adventure that nopony else remembers, hoping until her final days that reality sticks around. Dude, that's creepy.
Can I just say how happy I am that this is a happy ending! Lol. I don't usually do too well with grim darks and the only reason I got through this is my love for the movie. But anyways fantastic job! You gave this story it's on story and didnt just say The Thing.... WITH PONIES. Fantastic work!
This... All I know for sure is that nothing is certain. She is either a god now, or she imagined up a new life (what is the difference?), or nothing is real and she is trapped to think everything is fine...
You know what I love most about this story? It has originality. Sure you crossover parts from the apocalypse trilogy, but there's so much original stuff in here. For example, these last few chapters have been deeply influenced by In the Mouth of Madness. At the end of the film, Sam Neil gives into the madness. Here, Twilight thinks the Old Ones out of existence. I love your spin on the movies. And I really enjoyed where you put one of the best lines from The Thing. It fits really well.
DAYUM! This is some Cartesian schnitt right here!
This ended really closely to how my first prediction showed it.
I feel like this is mirroring an earlier part of the story. Am I right? I forget what though.
Ooh, I like that split!
"bludgeons" needs an apostrophe
Whew! So now twilight lives on, with this secret adventure that nopony else remembers, hoping until her final days that reality sticks around. Dude, that's creepy.
Can I just say how happy I am that this is a happy ending! Lol. I don't usually do too well with grim darks and the only reason I got through this is my love for the movie. But anyways fantastic job! You gave this story it's on story and didnt just say The Thing.... WITH PONIES. Fantastic work!
What a complete and total mindfuck, I love it.
This... All I know for sure is that nothing is certain. She is either a god now, or she imagined up a new life (what is the difference?), or nothing is real and she is trapped to think everything is fine...
You know what I love most about this story? It has originality. Sure you crossover parts from the apocalypse trilogy, but there's so much original stuff in here. For example, these last few chapters have been deeply influenced by In the Mouth of Madness. At the end of the film, Sam Neil gives into the madness. Here, Twilight thinks the Old Ones out of existence. I love your spin on the movies. And I really enjoyed where you put one of the best lines from The Thing. It fits really well.
Now that is a conclusion!!