I am ever so slightly concerned that this is not yet over. D: It felt over! Or at least headed for a definite ending.
Interesting start to this chapter. A POV switch that works well, and more importantly is handled properly.
WHOA WAIT WHAT WAIT WHAT WAIT WHOA
He's wanting to know what she saw... This isn't real, is it? Hmm, but then it switches to Weaver's POV... Argh, confused! Though I like how, even after the main danger has passed, there are still questions and puzzles to figure out.
"with the rest of her body was similarly": take out 'was'
Uh-oh!
This seems to have become a completely different sort of story. c.c
@_@
I really have to call you out on using 'feet' and 'meter' in the same sentence. D:
So was everything reset? But things have changed...
This is the thing taking everything over. Or in her mind, something like that. Oh man oh man.
Growling Mad Ponies? Really? This is not the time for ponified musical references.
NOW I am scared. Pinkie, what did you do?
Ah, and what I at first thought was Pinkie breaking the fourth wall actually comes back to an earlier thought I didn't put words to: it's all about the books somehow.
You've got me gibbering madly to myself with Pinkie being squeezed by the green things. @_@
Oh wow, that's a great plan!
YES AND THE DRAGON KNOWS WHAT IT IS
That was the best line, seriously. :D Wow, shit, what a chapter. I can only imagine that the Princess's absence has something to do with something...
I'm going to take a shot in the dark and say that, like the majority or readers, I thought a The Thing crossover with Ponies would be bad, really really bad.
But, also like said majority, I am currently eating my words with gusto. This is a brilliant fanfic. Extremely well executed and so much suspense.
So now we're neck deep in scenes from In the Mouth of Madness where everyone who read Cane's books went absolutely bonkers and let The Old Ones back in. There was also the bit where the main character escapes the hospital in all the chaos. There's also a lot of original stuff in here that's really good as well. I had also forgotten about the message scene from Prince of Darkness until this chapter. Still creepy.
I have a feeling this sugar cane is behind all this. Will the next chapter be the last?
Sugar Cane is just as much a victim as twilight...
Bravo! Keep it up!
I am ever so slightly concerned that this is not yet over. D: It felt over! Or at least headed for a definite ending.
Interesting start to this chapter. A POV switch that works well, and more importantly is handled properly.
WHOA WAIT WHAT WAIT WHAT WAIT WHOA
He's wanting to know what she saw... This isn't real, is it? Hmm, but then it switches to Weaver's POV... Argh, confused! Though I like how, even after the main danger has passed, there are still questions and puzzles to figure out.
"with the rest of her body was similarly": take out 'was'
Uh-oh!
This seems to have become a completely different sort of story. c.c
@_@
I really have to call you out on using 'feet' and 'meter' in the same sentence. D:
So was everything reset? But things have changed...
This is the thing taking everything over. Or in her mind, something like that. Oh man oh man.
Growling Mad Ponies? Really? This is not the time for ponified musical references.
NOW I am scared. Pinkie, what did you do?
Ah, and what I at first thought was Pinkie breaking the fourth wall actually comes back to an earlier thought I didn't put words to: it's all about the books somehow.
You've got me gibbering madly to myself with Pinkie being squeezed by the green things. @_@
Oh wow, that's a great plan!
YES AND THE DRAGON KNOWS WHAT IT IS
That was the best line, seriously. :D Wow, shit, what a chapter. I can only imagine that the Princess's absence has something to do with something...
I'm going to take a shot in the dark and say that, like the majority or readers, I thought a The Thing crossover with Ponies would be bad, really really bad.
But, also like said majority, I am currently eating my words with gusto. This is a brilliant fanfic. Extremely well executed and so much suspense.
MOAR!
80 feet Pinkie Pie The world is DOOMED!
Brilliant chapter. I'm really curious what happens in Canterlot!
So now we're neck deep in scenes from In the Mouth of Madness where everyone who read Cane's books went absolutely bonkers and let The Old Ones back in. There was also the bit where the main character escapes the hospital in all the chaos. There's also a lot of original stuff in here that's really good as well. I had also forgotten about the message scene from Prince of Darkness until this chapter. Still creepy.
Things fall apart, the center cannot hold...holy crap. Nice reference with the Dragon by the way.