Human in Equestria16,976 stories ·16,822 members
Game Crossovers4,412 stories ·5,469 members
Transformations5,229 stories ·5,794 members
I Just Want a Comment15,704 stories ·3,671 members
Adult Foals and Diapered Pony Crusaders YAY!804 stories ·941 members
Isaac Archer used to be human. Used to, being the key word. After encountering a strange flower, Isaac finds himself reborn as the newest member of the royal family, an alicorn prince by the name of Dusk Star. With an OCD mother, and a too cool for school dad, Dusk finds himself having a rather interesting second life.
Page generated in 0.214 seconds
Total duration
1,007 users online
2,118,209 hits today, 2,280,440 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I read a few similar Stories like that. Let's see where this is going.
So far, i'ts a good start.
Pleas continu this fic
4516606 As it happens, we're working on chapter 3 now.
Really? I though Twilight will be more clueless I mean with something as 'he is smarter than what he looks like' I would though she will think with some pride saying that its must be from her genetics.
Oh well at least she doesn't hate him or anything for all purpose he just embrace his new life and they accept him for who he is…he hasn't being lying or pretending he is just going with the flow, oh well it will interest on how things develop.
One thing is for sure…Luna will babysit the hell out of him each time she had the chance
Hmmmm... I'm not sure if this is too rational of Twilight. I expected her response to be more motivated by maternal instincts (pride at his apparent intelligence, protectiveness around Discord, that kind of thing.). Let's see.
4549069 She's more or less talking about Discord's conversations with Dusk over Duck's "intelligence"
So…the crystal empire had their on Martygrad? What happen when Dust reach 16? did he can throw the necklaces?
4568100 It was the crystal fair and at this point in the story Dusk is still under 1. As for him throwing candy, I imagine it was very poorly.
4568123
Last time you mention he was starting magic and its has being mounts ever since, so…I imagine he is really good now and having a royal guard as a dad could mean he has a good aim
Please get this chapter edited soon, all the mistakes are hard to ignore.
I agree with Lightingace, Dusk should be pretty good at telekinesis at his age (Mother, is Alicorn of Magic. Even if he can't pick up anything heavier then a pound or throw it further then, lets say 10ft, that should be enough to toss candy (that should weigh at most 1/2lb) to other ponies).
... sorry about that, this story is too interesting for me to allow a mistake like that to happen.
4568331 We never actually stated in the chapter how he threw the candy, just that he did.
4568431
My bad.
... That is true...
Equines can walk one hour after they're born
4579041 We kinda had to wing it since it's not really shown well in the show. We probably should have gone with that but we figured we'd do our own thing.
See even Discord knows better then to break a pinkie pie promise.
Hey I had a question they say he already meet Pound and Pundking can they communicated with Dusk too because they all talk baby?
Ah. Birth chapter. Usualy such chapters are poorly executed.
ddragon.leagueoflegends.com/cdn/img/champion/splash/Velkoz_0.jpg
Oh rly? Did he read Flash`s portfolio?
Ofcourse, after pushing several kg of mass out of her body, female will start to sing... yea. Are you Dysney?
Oh God, poor Redheart, every delitant think that using known background pony is good for the story... Redheart was used as nurse, surgeon, doctor, pediator. Try to apply some skill and create your own OC, k?
Yessssh. Make him suffer, amuse me.
It was laughable, thx.
Yeah, suck her dry, boy.
Wrong coloration. 3 cold colors.
First ingection of political propaganda for newborn. Author, are you a sadist?
Mb, teared her apart and branwashed? Add some novelty.
Yeah, another report, show the product to your master. Show her another pawn.
Cute story in general.
NO
Like same concept a human dies and ends up as Fluttershy and Discord child as well?
I like the idea it could be Dusk best friend and Dusk could help him cop with the new world
4585103 We might just add them to this fic and not make a new one.
4585125
I like it, yeah I like it very much by the way why you keep saying We instead of I, are you like trying to talk like Luna, you know with renascent accent and all that or is actually 2 working on this project?
4585132 I have Zubric as my Co-author
yes
4585155
Ah that explains it
4585828
Thank you for the complement.
Well looks like Luna is having her doughs as well, question does Dusk already know how to talk?
4593805 He;s talked before, in the foalsitting chapter with Discord. At this point he can speak simple words and small, simple sentences.
4593812
Well he can talk broke words and not full sentences, for what I see that its why he use short words what I mean is that if his speech pater had improve and it has very impress for a 1 year colt, perhaps his mind is speeding his growth
4593841 I'd imagine that ponies develop more quickly then human infants.
4593856
Probably, and hey, do you think he could communicated with Pound and Pumpkin? I mean they are more of less the same age right?
Daw...
Luna's guessing a bit of the truth. All she needs to do is enter his dream at the right time.
The story has no main character?
4602062 No we're going to add the main character from the spin off story into this one as a side character.
4602066
no more humies pls
4602068 No more are going to get in besides this character. I don't want or plan on any more than those two.
4602072
SELF-INSERTERS
4602165 I don't feel that i've self inserted. At least that's not what I intended
Fawning! good one!
i suppose that of any of them, Discord would notice
“ He’s been afraid for some time that you would leave me'' I think it shude stand ''he's been afraid some time that you whude leave him''
Well…the cat is out of the hat apparently boy is that going to be an weird conversation tomorrow
Mom, Dad…I'm a reincarnation
you mean...
or better yet...
Luna Claus! Priceless!
Oh this will interest, and now that the cat is out of the hat I wonder if they will keep it a secret or they will share it with the world
that was short. TOO short in my opinion.
4612344 We tried to make it longer but we just couldn't come up with anything else.